Need some help / how can i improve my site?

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Hello everyone, i'm new to the Shopify family and started like everyone else making a website ^^

Since i see there some expert here, would be nice if you can review my website to tell me what is good or what to changes because i'm a little lost, i did Facebook ADS / ect but very low conversion ( i got one sale from cart recovery this month ) <= 

Oh and sorry for my english... i try really hard :D

Thanks !