Ivy here from Shopify.
Firstly let me say congratulations on your beautiful store! It's looks fab. I am not familiar with Fiverr's website review - could you outline for me please what this involves? I went to kayliswonderland.com and I have a few suggestions which may help to get this moving for you:
I feel these changes could have a really positive impact on your store. Once everything on the store is exactly how you want it, the next thing we need to look at is your marketing plan. Can you outline for me please what your current marketing plan looks like?
In addition to Ivy’s recommendations, you need to apply some urgency strategy such as “limited time offers”. People maybe interested in your products but maybe they say “I’ll buy it later” because there is nothing to push them to buy it now!
Not buying is not a good option nowadays instead we should buy thing online because the world has changed to online system rapidly because of COVID, so a lot of good brands are working online which has a very good quality. For example : Nike, Adidas , Harajuku store, Zara Gul, Engine etc.