Which theme are you using and try implementing all the feedbacks, especially the typo issue.
Try using this app - https://apps.shopify.com/social-testimonial-slider
The store looks much better now, I think you can still make some following changes and see how sales comes in.
I hope my feedback will help you converting visitors into customers.
May it rains customers and orders,
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