All feedback welcome but...

9 0 1 gentle! I just launched my first store. It is super simple - intentionally. Let me know what you think, and don’t forget to check out the FAQs. Thx!!

Hi @11ofTwelve 


Few Areas You Need To Improve 

  • Home Page (flow) 
  • Build Product Descriptions 
  • About Page 
  • Contact Page 
  • Site Navigation
  • Footer 


I'll private message you a more detailed review going over these key areas. 


The FAQ's Page is great. If you put as much effort into your website as that page I'm sure you will do great things online. 



Clayton Bates  

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Hi @11ofTwelve 


I just took a look at your store and I think it looks really good. There are just a few minor things that I might consider changing


One thing you might want to add is reviews. It would be good to add reviews for your products. Think about it when was the last time you bought a product without reading the reviews first? I think you should definitely add some reviews.


Another thing you might want to add is a sense of urgency. By using urgency, you can make your visitors feel like they are missing out unless they order immediately. The 'Fear of Missing Out' that they experience, will increase your ability to convert them into buyers. One app that can help you with that is . It really can make a big difference in getting your customers to buy from you


One thing to consider is adding a blog. If you had a blog you would be able to drive more organic traffic to your store, plus it would help establish yourself as an expert.


Overall your store looks really good, I think with just a little bit of time and effort you'll be able to create a really awesome store!


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