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This is my shop done totally on my phone i really want feedback and help tips advise to bring sales toolsplusshop.com
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Hi there,

 

From a design standpoint, here are my observations:

  • I'd recommend making the title more distinct. You almost miss it depending on the image being flashed.
  • This is a super minor note, but why do you have cherries where the announcement is at the top? It doesn't really match the rest of the website. Also, I'd change it to "Free Shipping on Orders Over $10"
  • Instead of "Some of our Favorites," I'd put "Best Sellers" or "New Arrivals."
  • The social media icons at the bottom are a little sparse. Are you marketing through social media a lot? If so, I'd invest more into that. You don't have to include the name of the social media platform if you already have the icon.
  • You're missing a few key links from the bottom, like your return policy and a contact form.
  • The descriptions are a little cluttered. I'd recommend shortening them and following proper capitalization.
  • If possible, you should get better pictures for your products. The bright white against the cornflower blue background doesn't seem particularly cohesive with the technological theme you have going on. I'd also change the font to something else, maybe a sans serif font.
  • I wouldn't have an "Add to Cart" and  "Buy It Now" option. The latter kind of eliminates your ability to upsell.
  • I know that the countdown timers and quantity left alerts are popular for dropshipping websites, but I'm personally not a fan. If you do choose to include them, I'd try to make them a little less obtrusive.
  • The item description needs to be tidied up. The formatting is irregular, and I worry the small text isn't very legible to those with poorer eyesight.

Best of luck!

Marketing Specialist @ ShipMonk
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Tourist
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I agree with what beaships said about the cherries, I'd also suggest taking off the word "dollars", you already have the $, you dont need the word after. Also, on the second slide, you say "wireless headphones" and then "get my wireless headphones", which feels a little redundant.

It does feel very, very empty, I would suggest maybe adding a best seller section under "some of our favorites" or something to fill up the space, as well as a refund/return policy, about us page, contact page, shipping policy, and ect. Shopify has some tools you can use to generate these pretty quickly.
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Thank you for the reviews sorry im not up to some expectations but i am new and im trying very hard
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Hey, there!

 

I agree with Bea's points in general, and they warrant serious consideration. What I would suggest is that you take a step back and think about your business from a bigger perspective.

 

A huge part of e-commerce is creating a brand that visitors connect to. Think about a popular tool company. For example, DeWalt. Everyone knows the DeWalt colours and logo. When you hear DeWalt you think of their yellow and black power tools. Now, of course this didn't happen overnight but it's important to build your businesses foundation correctly from the beginning. You need your website to be functional and distinctive, and to clearly and relevantly articulate what your brand is all about . Currently, your site is too plain, there is no identity.

 

Here is the DeWalt homepage:

 

 

You'll note a few things: Their logo is clear and distinctive. You can't mistake the colours for any other brand. The menus are clear, functional and relate to each other. There is an interesting, original image that showcases one of their products in use. And, there is original, interesting copywriting that affirms the quality of their products in an inspirational way.

 

I'm not suggesting you copy everything about DeWalt, but there are certain standards that you'll want to make sure you adhere to so your foundation is solid so that as you build everything fits together. An overall strategy is needed. Start by creating a marketing plan -it's an outline of your business's big picture: Who you're targeting, what channels you're going to use to communicate, your writing style, sales tactics, and goal setting. A marketing plan is your map to success. Without it there's a good change you'll feel lost or that you're 'shooting in the dark'.

 

Once you've created a marketing plan, start crafting the details about how your brand will be represented in images, colour, and text. This gives you a guideline on how to maintain consistency in your brand's image. This is a great guide on how to do that. 

 

Finally, when you've got a website that effectively communicates to your target audience and is navigable you want start purchasing online advertisements to bring traffic, and as much as you can. I would start with Facebook ads using our free app Kit.

 

I hope I haven't overwhelmed you with information. But, if you follow these guides your chances of success will increase ten fold.

 

Love to hear what others think.

 

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