Hi! I took a quick look at the link and I couldn't tell what the product is. Is it a ball? It does something, but I can't tell what. Maybe you need a video of it in action? Maybe a better product title? There's a lot of text and I didn't read it all, but ideally, a customer understand the product without having to read much. Good luck!
After looking through your product page, I think there are some improvements that we can make to increase conversion rate on the site:
That would be enough for now. Please let me know if it helps bring sales to the page :D
I'm new to shopify, and I'm new to this forum as well. I still can't figure out to create a new post. I'm hoping to use existing post for help instead. I have running my FB ads for 2 days now using CBO, but I can't convert. Maybe it's the way my page design, please take a look at www.zingpet.com and be as honest as possible, and if you can provide some recommendation for improvement. It would be awesome.