I am looking to make my store better, more usable https://pyramidcomics.net
Thank you so much for your time. Peter, Pyramid Comics
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Hi there! Maggie, Shopify Expert here
Your store looks really great! Now, to cover your questions, see below:
Banner - yes it feels confusing, as in someone would have to pause to decipher where exactly is "local". Why not change it to: FREE delivery over $20 within AZ only [example], Free delivery on orders over $40 within USA. You can phrase it differently, just make sure to specify which location you cover for your local shipping.
Load speed - yes, they load pretty fast. Here's the screenshot from Pingdom Tools:
The background color looks great - it suits your niche.
The homepage does feel cluttered a bit - it can be overwhelming for visitors so I do recommend clearing it slightly. Especially that your images are quite busy, if you put a lot of them together, they start to blend in, so visitors can find it more challenging to decide which one to click, which can affect your sales.
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