Feedback on brand concept and store appearance

AHope
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Hi all, brand new to Shopify. Have been building this brand concept for a year. Hoping for someone to read the about page, understand the brand concept and give feedback on the content. In ways it feels like a bare minimum for now but I've worked so hard to put this together I have a bit of writers block for more detailed content. 

 

Can someone juat give an opinion  on the overall look of the site in relation to the concept 

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etrendz
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Hey @AHope,

 

Provide us with your store URL

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AHope
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AHope
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Guess that would help hey. Forgot to add it. 

 

https://freshcoastclothing.ca

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etrendz
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Hi @AHope

 

I have reviewed the about us page and it looks good so far, I would suggest adding some more information about the Brand itself: 

  • When was it founded?
  • Where is it based? 
  • How much money have you donated to the non-profits so far?

About the homepage appearance:

  • The slide is good with a nice quote however add more information on the homepage, such as collections, testimonials, your mission, vision, etc. 

Footer:

  • Your footer is empty with just one link 'search'
  • You should add the legal policy pages, terms of service, contact us option
  • Social media channels and their links
  • A general email address people can reach out to ask you questions. Such as "sales@freshcoastclothing@.ca". It will add a more pro look.

Product page:

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  • Be clear about the shipping costs. "shipping calculated at checkout" usually drives customers away. 
  • Add more description about clothes' materials and so on.

I may have gone into too much detail. However, you have a good brand and so far the appearance looks fine but needs more work as I mentioned. 

Feel free to shoot me a message if and we can discuss more. 

 

Thanks

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