Feedback on my landing page

Shopify Partner
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We have one product with a very specific audience - Shriner's clowns. We have created a special package at a discount price for them. They tend to be a bit older crowd, mostly men, and not super tech saavy. I want the page to be informative, and easy to use. Also wondering if the actual product should be at the top of the page? Any other comments welcome too...

http://www.luckydesignmedia.com/products/lucky-clown-cards

Thanks for any feedback!

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Shopify Staff
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Hey Julia,

Overall, everything is looking great! 

I personally like a slider or banner image of the product at the top but the way you have it set up may be the most ideal for your target customer as it's straight-forward and allows them to see the information easily when getting to the site. 

I think the site looks well organized and is easy to use - the only recommendation I would make is to add more images (for example to the About page) just to add a bit more personality of your brand to the site :) 

Keep up the great work! 

-Danielle 

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Shopify Partner
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Thanks Danielle! 

That is a good suggestion. I also was concerned about too much text when the page loads. A banner image might do the trick :)

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