Still have a lot to add from previous thread. Here is some helpful videos that could also help you. View HERE or https://www.inspiresmallbusiness.com/blogs/shopify
Hope I can help by providing some feedback.
I notice a pop-up as soon as I land on your homepage. I would delay or remove this, as it distracts from understanding what you do. Also, your header area is quite large. White space can be helpful, but in this case it is pushing the rest of your content quite far down the page.
The wording across the main banner image isn't too clear to me. I'm still not sure what you do or what you sell.
You list a 'collection highlight' further down the page, but there is then no option to click through or buy the product.
Hope that helps - Gareth