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unfortunately, your domain doesn't seem to work here is the instructions to check your setup https://help.shopify.com/en/manual/domains if your having issues please feel free to reach out
It looks OK to be honest you need some consistency in the typography and visual elements that a designer could bring to it, I would also re-order the menu as the Shop is the most important and is currently 4th id also remove the home link. Id make the menu white so you can read it.
Essentially communicate the same message and content but make it less busy
We could have one of our designers restyle the theme for you if you like
No problem just let me know if you would like us to take a look at your theme and make some adjustments we can do that in duplicate of the theme so if you don't think its an improvement you can simply jsut not publish it