This is an accepted solution.
The three most important pages on your website are
Until you can get these pages right its nearly impossible to make a good amount of sales. One example is your product page. The description needs a lot of work. With out good description this is going to kill your conversions my friend.
Shopify is all a learning curve. Keep working hard and I'm sure you will see results. I'll also email you a more detailed review now. Keep up the good work.