I would love some critical feedback!

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My price is at 55 because I am the only person selling in the market, it’s fully hand-drawn, and just selling it as a top quality product. Although my visitors don’t see the value yet how do I get them to?

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Hey, @Chrisgray1002 

I actually think it's a cool product! However, there is very little in the description of the product or the homepage to explain what it is and the features/benefits of the product. I recommend checking out our guide on writing engaging product descriptions that will help you sell more. 

In addition, I recommend checking out our Shopify design articles to get inspiration and ideas on how to build a great looking webpage with Shopify. Homepage Design 101 is a recommended resource to check out!

If there is anything else I can help you with, please let me know.


Dirk | Social Care @ Shopify 
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