There are a couple of things I might consider adding to your store, but overall good work
After looking I couldn't find a blog. If you had a blog you would be able to drive more organic traffic to your store, plus it would help establish yourself as an expert.
One thing to consider is adding a sense of urgency. One of the main reasons why people don't buy from a store is because they feel like they can buy it whenever. A big thing that can help more of your visitors be turned into buyers would be by adding a sense of urgency to your store. One way to add urgency is to have a sale, and all sales need an end date. You can easily add a sale to your store with a countdown timer. One countdown timer that I recommend is https://apps.shopify.com/better-countdown .
Overall your store looks really good, I think with just a little bit of time and effort you'll be able to create a really awesome store!
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I think the major issue is the confusing niche of your store. The website is called "Adorable Baby Finds" with a toddler in a hero image, yet the rest of the homepage shows women's apparel - someone who clicks onto your store, is sure to expect baby products, and that's what they are shopping for. It's unlikely they will somehow buy ladies bikini or printed Tshirts.
I recommend working on the niche / business name / products to stay consistent and meet your visitors' expectations.