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New Member
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Hello Fellow Shopify Merchants and Experts, I wanted to drop my site in here and get some scathing, but well meaning reviews for our site. We've been up for awhile(May 1st), but I want to see if there is anything getting in the way of conversions or interaction with my customers. Feedback is greatly appreciated!

 

Derrick

www.adr-unique.com

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Shopify Partner
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Hey Derrick, 

great to see your store up and running. 

Here are some of my suggestions.

Homepage

  • I think that headline od the main slider is to "soft" (are you unique). Try something more powerful (eg. More than XXX premium quality bracelets.
  • CTA on the banners below the main slider doesnt stand out. Try make it more colorul and with some contrast. 
  • This is how the webshop looks on mobile devices (http://prntscr.com/bsumay). I would definitely try to make this banner smaller and add some strong headlines and CTA buttons. 
  • I saw that you have some content on Instagram. I would definitely embed those posts with some app to the page and build some social proof with that. 
  • Happy Customers
    • Ask your buyers on the Facebook for a testimonial and embed them on into a new page in navigation (eg. Happy Customers).  

Mobile Page

  • If you're running shop in the US you will probably get a lot of traffic from mobile. 
  • Your logo is quite big and on mobile devices takes a lot of space (http://prntscr.com/bsunz8). 
    • We have the same problem and here you can see how we resolved this issue.

I hope this helps. :) 

Cheers,
Timotej

 

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Excursionist
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Message sent Derrick please review

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New Member
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Hi Leon, Unfortunately I didn't recieve your message. Could you retry? My apologies.

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Excursionist
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Please check your email again Thanks

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Shopify Partner
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Hi Derrick

Love your template colors, nicely complimenting leather products

CTA on the banner [text] is little visible -consider adding white 40% transparent overlay underneath it and change font to black. Consider re-wording

Featured products - excellent

Welcome text is an image - not great for SEO. Make sure to always use written text, it's crawlable by Google bots, which cannot read the text within the image

There's secondary sliding banner underneath [actually very nice] - consider moving to the top, that's a standard web design practice

Even more featured products underneath - does homepage have some duplicate code inserted by mistake?

'Why Be Unique' mosaic panel stands out from the rest of the site - make sure to match it with template colors

Hope it helps!

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New Member
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Thanks Rock Paper Copy! The second "featured products" is actually a collection drop down that you can shop from the main page. I can remove it if there are too many products on front page? I will correct the unique banner also. The welcome message was due to my template allowing for an image there. I wanted to personalize the front page and not throw just products into the consumers face.

Thanks again!

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