Hey @Kinley0221!
Cal here from Shopify, thanks for reaching out to us. I've taken a look at all the work you've done so far. There are some really positive aspects to all the work you've done! There a few little adjustments I'd recommend:
- Popups on the store are on top of each other. This leads to a very unpleasant user experience.
- Add a favicon to your store.
- I feel there is some work you could undertake on the branding aspect of your business. Have you considered designing a logo for your business? You could use our free logo maker here.
- You should title your product correctly, and not use the generic supplier product titles, same with the product descriptions. These should be rewritten to make sense to your target audience.
- I would like to see an About Us on the page too, as I currently know nothing about who you are, what your mission statement is, what sets you apart from similar stores, etc. You can learn how to write a really great About Us here.
Keep up the good work, and if you want us to have a look at the changes you've made just let us know and we'd be happy to take another look!
Cal | Social Care @ Shopify
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