Hey there @VLjewellery ! Your store looks elegant and it fits for a jewellery store! I'd like to suggest the following things -
1. Since your srore's background is white, you should use a different colour of texts. Also, if you can choose another font that looks decent and elegant it'll be awesome! Have a look at this screenshot -
Due to white background, beauty the font is faded away. Either change background colour or change the font to make it sync with the website.
2. Again, you have designed a decent logo, but due to white background it's also not visible.
3. Footer section looks decent no change over there, but you can always add a blog section to give your store more weight and authenticity!
Rest, everything looks fine. Because it's your initial store set up phase, Keep experimenting with the design and back-end stuff to come up with best of the best combination! & Don't forget to add analytical tools in your store to be able to track users from day 1 !!
I'm from CedCommerce - a group of coders and tech enthusiasts trying to help eCommerce guys with their store set up. You can reach out to me anytime for any kind of customisation ; add-ons or drafting sales/marketing/social media strategy! We have helped quite a few entrepreneurs in their journey, and if you need a helping hand, we would be glad to offer one!
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Wish you luck for your Shopify journey! Cheers! .-.