I finally finished up setting my store. at first the theme was designed more for desktop users. but since most of the traffic is from mobile. i changed the setting to be more mobile friendly. i had traffic but not a single sale. from the report it showed that visitors quit after the homepage. i ignored the desktop, i would appreciate any feedback or a reason on what might get mobile users off.
The first 4 problems I see:
#1 Your first slide (About us) has grammar issues
#2 Your slides should showcase the products you're selling not policies
#3 The blue background color is terrible
#4 Homepage is too clunky. It might be best to put the videos/tutorials on the individual product pages.
Those are my immediate observations. Hope that helps.
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Your store looks really good and is unique with the products .I reviewed your store and here are some of my feedbacks that you can implement on the site easily.With a little patience and some tips, you can reach good amount of sales.
I hope my feedback will help you converting visitors into customers.
May it rains customers and orders,
@Hypnique_Btq Thank you for your detailed observations. I changed some things according to what you said. but when i tried other background color (white) i looked encouraging. i tried other colors as well. it looked scammy. now only a slideshow is there featuring all the store's info. with nothing else. in addition to that. ive put currency converter.
To be completely honest, had you not asked for a review, I would have quit after the homepage, I actually still was about to (if we're being honest). WHY? Because I have ZERO idea what I am looking at... A security company? Data Firm? Mail Company? I am having to work entirely too hard to find out what I am looking at. Secondly, this site feels like it was put together in a few hour. I suggest looking into a professional/professional template to assist you with better direction.
@neha-sparq I've been taking the time to apply the things you said. and overall it looks slightly better. I'm not there yet. But I'm heading towards more improvement. But about the landing page. I've checked many times and the landing page seems to be the home page to me. So maybe I've missed something.. But now this is the modified version: https://happyhomefactory.net/
The slide show looks bad in desktop view. i tried to adjust it but no result. the reason why its still here is because it looks good with mobile view. I will try to look up on how exactly to adjust it with desktops. But other than that. If you have more comments on how to make it better they're much appreciated as before.
Thank you for taking the time.
@SBOfficial Even though I spent days on this. I did try to finish every aspect in a matter of an hour. Rather than investing more time into 1 aspect at a time. I thought I had it right. then it hit me. However with your and others observations. I spent the time repairing the major mistakes. Now I see 1 problem which is the slideshow for desktop view. I will keep looking into how to resize it while still maintaining the current mobile view. https://happyhomefactory.net/
If you have the time and did see other problems to point out. that will be appreciated as before.
Thankyou for your kind words . Happy to help you.
Were you able to download sparq?, You can get it from here. Let me know if you need any help.
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