Re: Lack of engagement and sales. I have a great brand but no interest compared to Etsy

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Lack of engagement and sales. I have a great brand but no interest compared to Etsy

woowooboutique
Tourist
6 1 0

Lack of engagement and sales. I have a great brand but no interest compared to Etsy. What can I do to improve this?

@woowooboutique 

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woowooboutique
Tourist
6 1 0

This is an accepted solution.

Thats just brilliant! I so appreciated you help ... brutal is good I am so unhappy with it ..I will ask my son to help me. Many thanks Eva

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PeakDistrictSEO
Shopify Partner
11 0 4

Hi, are we talking about this website? https://www.woowooboutique.com/

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woowooboutique
Tourist
6 1 0

Yes thats right

woowooboutique
Tourist
6 1 0

I out it together myself and it is rubbish

PeakDistrictSEO
Shopify Partner
11 0 4

Dont worry. Your products are amazing! Would you like me to offer a quick and dirty critique with pointers about what to do with the website?

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woowooboutique
Tourist
6 1 0

I would be ever so grateful its touch and go so anything advice is so welcome x

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PeakDistrictSEO
Shopify Partner
11 0 4


So I looked at your website, I haven't looked at your Etsy Store yet.  

 

The first thing to say is that if your business is doing well on Etsy or other platforms, you'd do well to invest in a proper website here.  Obviously, small businesses, start with tight budgets,  But you should be able to get a Shopify designer by just asking on LinkedIn. I did and was inundated with offers.   

1) Mint Green banner...the first TEXT on it says No refunds..
that's gonna put people off straight away. At least let them look at the site first...before you say..."we're NOT prepared to assist you".

 2) black backgrounds are a big no-no unless you have one heck of a designer. It makes text hard to read.

3) The font you are using is a SERIF fort and is slightly hard to read. People with reading impairment might struggle with it. I recommend changing it to something a little earlier on the eye. 

4) Your images are not really professional enough to make me feel I'm dealing with a professional company. They look like the models have been cut around and placed into the background, also some of the photos are blurry.  Obviously, Pro photographers are expensive, so perhaps you have a friend who's a good amateur photographer?

5) Invest in a proper logo it looks like you have something already on your Instagram which has loads of followers.  Ask a designer to convert that into a banner you can use on the website.

 

6) You need Trust signals.  Trust signals are things like: payment logos. Paypal, Visa etc. this helps people to see that it's going to be easy to check out.  

7) Try to make your product descriptions more unique, 
for example.

https://www.woowooboutique.com/collections/coats-jackets/products/leopard-print-bomber-jacket-with-s...

you start off well but then just fill up with a generic copy... try to tell us something about the product that makes it special. its benefits, what inspired it...

😎 Conversion help..you have to make checkout easy. if people have to work...they WONT.  your pricing and "add to cart" button and "other payment options"  are almost invisible. they need to be clear, loud and proud.

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This was just a Very quick critique, and I hope not too brutal?  I'd be happy to discuss some options for moving forward with your site if you want. no pitches...just a friendly chat.

Hope that helps, 
Phil

Get your website found: UK based SEO & PPC for small-medium sized businesses.
woowooboutique
Tourist
6 1 0

This is an accepted solution.

Thats just brilliant! I so appreciated you help ... brutal is good I am so unhappy with it ..I will ask my son to help me. Many thanks Eva

PeakDistrictSEO
Shopify Partner
11 0 4

Glad to have helped a little, Eva.  I followed you on Insta, maybe follow back to keep in touch? it's @PeakDistrictSEO

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woowooboutique
Tourist
6 1 0
yes thank you