Can anyone provide a review for my upcoming fashion store?

Can anyone provide a review for my upcoming fashion store?

Parminder12
New Member
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Can somebody give me review of my store https://fashionhacks.ca. I am launchibg soon and invest lot of money.can somebody help me in reviewing the store and give honest opinion

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r35mk5
New Member
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Your store looks better than mine lol, but yes it's good and you would be good to launch!

Parminder12
New Member
5 0 0
Is it ok if i can compare other store prices on my product page ##- Please
type your reply above this line -##
r35mk5
New Member
14 0 0

Yes it would be as long as you keep it clean and if they don't mind. 

Parminder12
New Member
5 0 0

Which plugin i can use can u help

r35mk5
New Member
14 0 0

You can use a plugin that will create a whole new page, and with that whole new page on the left should be your competitors price, and on the right it should be your price. 

theycallmemakka
Shopify Partner
1796 436 465

Home Page:

1. Too much Images. While reviewing your homepage, i noticed that most of the content on your home page are images. Try adding more text to this page. Try maintaining Code-to-Text Ratio. [Ref: Code-to-Text ratio ]

2. Remove the whitespace

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3. Logo is too small. Try making logo big enough to understand 

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4. Mobile header is too big. Reduce the height of the header and increase the size on the logo

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5. Images not displayed on product grid. This issue seems to be site wide. 

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All Pages:

Checkout button blends with the background. To make the checkout button on the floating cart more prominent, consider adding an eye-catching color.

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Product Page:

1. Design of Add to cart button and Buy now button is different. Try to make the design uniform sitewide.

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Checkout Page:

Logo of checkout button is almost not vissible.

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If you require further help to make all these changes on your store, please don't hesitate to reach out. If you find this information useful, a Like would be greatly appreciated. And if this solves the problem, please Mark it as Solution!

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Strangestore
New Member
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Damn that was the most elaborate and perfect answer Ive seen on here till now. Is it okay if I send you the link to my website for some critique as well? Im having some SSL issues but as soon as thats sorted ill send it right over! 

theycallmemakka
Shopify Partner
1796 436 465

You can create a similar post on the community. I will look into it and provide feedback. Once you create a post, please let me know here.

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MooseDesk
Shopify Partner
563 68 168

Hi @Parminder12 ,

 

Thanks for reaching out to the community. This is MooseDesk - All-in-one Shopify Ticketing System App

 

Congrats on your new store! Your store looks stunning. I can tell you have put a lot of effort into building this. However, I have some comments to make the good get even better. Here are some of my recommendations for your homepage, please kindly check.

 

1. Navigation bar

 

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The search field, company log, cart button, and other navigation sites should immediately obvious on the homepage. In this case, all of them are drowned in the black background and other eye-catching graphics, which can lead to problems for search-driven users.

 

Advice: There is still a lot of space on your navigation bar so feel free to increase the font size and especially the size of your company logo since it would also improve the brand awareness.

 

2. The layout of your homepage

First of all, homepage is usually an introductory page to attract visitors or in the other words, it typically acts as a table of content of your store. With that in mind, we should start off by highlighting your core products and brand features first. 

 

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Community support is a good selling point but should be prioritized over your featured products. Lack of initial clarity towards your product catalogs (which is why they are here) can result in premature abandonment. This also applies the same to your upcoming news and updates.

 

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Advice: For the community support, you can create a separate section for it after all the product catalogs. For the news & updates, you can convert them into pop-ups along with other promotions and discounts.

 

3. Product catalogs

Right now, your homepage includes so much information about promotions, news, featured product, brand names, etc. which would make visitors so confused and lost. Let's put everything in an order and start of with your product catalogs.

 

Advice: You should start off with brand categories first and go down to specific product types below. 

 

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After the brand categories, you can start to list out your product types following this template:

 

  • Hero banner to introduce the product type (Perfume for men)
  • A carousel to present featured products of that product type along with prices and add-to-cart button
  • View All CTA button

Once you have finished with all product types, you can then add other sections like Community Support (mentioned above), Contact us, Guarantees, Testimonials. etc. By following this format, you can shift the focus of the visitors on your featured products first, thus increasing the conversion rate.

 

Just a side note, you should also adjust the brand logos to match the same size as well.

 

4. CTA buttons

 

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Your current CTA buttons are centered and start with a verb. However, they are not visible due to the size and styling. 

 

Advice: Don't hesitate to enlarge your button. This would allow greater visibility and more people will act on it.

 

5. Promotions and discounts

 

Advice: The discount/promotion programs can be presented in form of pop-ups with 3 options
The pop-up will appear when you enter your site. You can choose “No” to close it, “Yes” to take advantage of it or “Maybe Later” to register your interest but get it out your way.

 

6. Other useful sections:

 

Advice: You should also add some sections to improve trust for your store such as reassurances (shipping, delivery, money-back guarantees, etc.) or testimonials to show actual statements from real customers on what they have said about your products.

 

7. Support & Loyalty sections

 

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I have also noticed that the Support and Loyalty reward buttons are overlapping on each other and it is very difficult for visitors to select the button they want.

 

Advice: You can move the widget of the Loyalty reward to the left corner of your page or create a separate section on the navigation bar.

 

By the way, if you are looking to upgrade your current ticketing management tool, free free to give MooseDesk a tryMooseDesk is a FREE customer service app/ticketing system that could help you do that. Our 24/7 support is always here to help you enhance the UX experience.

 

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PageFly-Garcia
Shopify Partner
497 80 137

Hi @Parminder12 

I am Garcia from PageFly - Shopify Advanced Page Builder App. I really like the simple and elegant design of the page. It's easy to navigate and I can quickly find the information I'm looking for. From my CRO expertise, I have some feedback for your Store and hope that they can help you increase the design. 

 

1. Have Favicon

A favicon is an opportunity to reinforce your brand identity. By using your logo or a unique icon, it helps users quickly recognize and associate your website with your brand.

 

2. Optimize space

Your sticky header is fantastic for seamless navigation. To optimize, try resizing it for more room for main content. Also, eliminate white space on the homepage for a sleek, professional look.

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The graphics on the hero banner are a bit confusing. I recommend that a banner should contain a heading, sub heading and CTA button. 

 

3. Change content for CTA button

The CTA button should be a Call to action such as: Explore now, But now…

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4. Keep the style consistent

The buttons on the page should be consistent in terms of their appearance and behavior, with the same style, color, and hover animation. Consistency helps users recognize interactive elements and understand how they function. When buttons have a uniform appearance, visitors can quickly identify them and know what to expect.

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5. Make use of Holiday season

As we near the holiday season, and numerous businesses are already preparing for events like Black Friday, Cyber Monday (BFCM) and Halloween…, your products are exceptionally well-suited for this festive period. I strongly advise following these suggestions to maximize the holiday spirit:

  • Provide a gift-wrapping option at checkout to offer convenience to customers buying gifts for others.
  • Offer personalized suggestions: Integrate a recommendation system that tailors product suggestions according to customers' browsing and purchasing history, enhancing their shopping experience with more pertinent choices.

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Happy Selling!
Garcia

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