Can someone review my updated GDPR data protection? How are customer requests handled?

[Markssxx]

I have updated my GDPR data protection etc is it possible someone could check it looks correct. Also when a data access request is made from a customer does anyone know how these are handled and stored? Am I being too pedantic about these? 

[Markssxx]

Thanks yes that’s what my post was asking. 

[Markssxx]

Thank you can you please refer me to them?