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Hi,
I am new to Shopify and dropshipping, any feedback would be really helpful 🙂
So I started running my FB ads, spent around 70$ and got around 30 Clicks, but not a single one is converted, people are not adding the product to cart. I have tried optimizing my store and offered good discounts too.
Can anyone provide suggestions please: https://lifegoodcompany.com/products/skin-therapy-wands
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Hi @abhnv89, this is Kate from the PageFly Shopify Builder team.
Starting a business can be hard, but you're on the right track with good customer reviews. However, for your Facebook ads, you need a special landing page, not just a product page. How well your Facebook ads work mostly depends on two things:
I'll keep my advice short and clear. If these tips help you, please show it by liking this comment or marking it as the solution.
1. Your hook (Facebook caption)
Steps to take:
Put yourself in the customer's shoes: why would you want a Wands Glass Tube? What makes this product trustworthy and worth-buying for you? Then, identify your strongest hook and craft a straightforward, direct Facebook caption that encourages the audience to click on your landing page and purchase your product.
Here's an example I wrote for you: “Ladies, transform your beauty routine now! 🌿✨
💁♀️ Check out our Therapy Wands for stunning skin and hair at [Your Landing Page - shortened version].
Simple, natural, and made just for you.”
Feel free to modify it to suit your style. Remember, it doesn't have to be perfect, it just needs to effectively convert. To optimize it, place your landing page link near the start of the caption.
2. Your landing page
It's a bit long, but I hope you reach the end. I believe these suggestions will help you improve your Facebook ad traction and sales. If you find them valuable, please let me know by giving a thumbs-up or marking this as a solution.
Wishing you a wonderful and cozy day ahead, and all the best in your business endeavors. Keep up the awesome work!
Cheers,
Kate | PageFly team
Please let me know if it works by giving it a Like or marking it as a solution!
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Hi there,
Don't worry! You'll likely on some point see thousands of views, a couple hundred clicks and maybe 10 or a little more adds to cart and actually converting. However, you can start by retargeting people who have already visited your website.
Keep in mind, dropshipping and running an ecommerce store is not 'quick money'. It will require time, energy and patience!
Hope this helps.
Thanks for the encouragement 🙂
Can you also take a look at my store and provide feedback about how I can optimize further please!
This is an accepted solution.
Hi @abhnv89, this is Kate from the PageFly Shopify Builder team.
Starting a business can be hard, but you're on the right track with good customer reviews. However, for your Facebook ads, you need a special landing page, not just a product page. How well your Facebook ads work mostly depends on two things:
I'll keep my advice short and clear. If these tips help you, please show it by liking this comment or marking it as the solution.
1. Your hook (Facebook caption)
Steps to take:
Put yourself in the customer's shoes: why would you want a Wands Glass Tube? What makes this product trustworthy and worth-buying for you? Then, identify your strongest hook and craft a straightforward, direct Facebook caption that encourages the audience to click on your landing page and purchase your product.
Here's an example I wrote for you: “Ladies, transform your beauty routine now! 🌿✨
💁♀️ Check out our Therapy Wands for stunning skin and hair at [Your Landing Page - shortened version].
Simple, natural, and made just for you.”
Feel free to modify it to suit your style. Remember, it doesn't have to be perfect, it just needs to effectively convert. To optimize it, place your landing page link near the start of the caption.
2. Your landing page
It's a bit long, but I hope you reach the end. I believe these suggestions will help you improve your Facebook ad traction and sales. If you find them valuable, please let me know by giving a thumbs-up or marking this as a solution.
Wishing you a wonderful and cozy day ahead, and all the best in your business endeavors. Keep up the awesome work!
Cheers,
Kate | PageFly team
Please let me know if it works by giving it a Like or marking it as a solution!
➜ Unlock the secrets to a record-breaking BFCM with PageFly and Canva
➜ Optimize your Shopify store with PageFly Page Builder (Free plan available)
➜ Weekly updated Shopify tutorials on YouTube
All features are available from the Free plan. Live Chat Support is available 24/7.
Wow!
Thank you so much Kate for this detailed review 🙂
I'll work on these and let you know the progress.
Hi @abhnv89 ,
I am so happy that my suggestions can be your solution.
Have a nice day and merry Christmas 😍
Please let me know if it works by giving it a Like or marking it as a solution!
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➜ Optimize your Shopify store with PageFly Page Builder (Free plan available)
➜ Weekly updated Shopify tutorials on YouTube
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Thank you, Merry Christmas to you too, and happy holidays 🙂
Hi @abhnv89,
I'm a new to dropshipping too, and I came across your post after I googled the same problem you had (a lot of clicks but no conversions/purchases).
I'm curious if you were able to get some conversions finally? I'd be happy to hear about your progress.
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