Hello yal would love some input on these landing pages

SwellNutrition
Tourist
9 0 7

Hey, feedback is appreciated. Would love some input on these landing pages. Personally I like them but need to see if I am going in the right direction.

 

#1 coffee https://www.swellnutritionshop.com/pages/landing-page

 

#2 Mushroom blend https://www.swellnutritionshop.com/pages/mushroomblendlanding 

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PageFly-Garcia
Shopify Partner
488 77 132

Hi @SwellNutrition 

I'm Garcia, a CRO expert at PageFly - Page Builder. I've thoroughly reviewed your Coffee and Mushroom blend landing pages and have some suggestions to improve your store's performance. 

1. Add Call-to-Action for hero banner

Put a clear button on your hero banner image that tells visitors what to do next. This can help get more people to do what you want on your site and it also guides visitors towards taking the desired action, significantly improving user engagement.

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2. Make sections shorter to fit in one scroll

Try to make each part of your page short enough so that visitors don't have to scroll too much to see everything. This makes your page easier to look at.

Example: 

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3. Add button hover effects

Adding hover effects to your buttons can increase interactivity and make your page more dynamic. It's a subtle yet effective way to improve user engagement.

4. Use more pictures

Add more pictures and less text to your pages. This makes your page nicer to look at and easier to understand.

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5. Mix text and pictures

Don't put too much text without pictures. Use both to keep your visitors interested.

6. Make important words stand out

In your text, make some words bold or different so they catch the eye. This helps visitors see the most important points.

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Moreover, Videos can be better than a lot of text. Videos are inherently more engaging than text. They combine visual and auditory elements, making them more appealing and easier to consume for most people. The dynamic nature of video captures attention more effectively than static text.

I hope these simple tips help you improve your pages. Looking forward to seeing your great work!

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SwellNutrition
Tourist
9 0 7

Thank you for the feedback, I will work on making it less wordy!

PageFly-Garcia
Shopify Partner
488 77 132

Hi,
Great to hear that my suggestions help you a bit, @SwellNutrition In case you need me to clarify any idea, please let me know. 
Cheers,
Garcia

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SwellNutrition
Tourist
9 0 7

Hi I implemented what I could from your suggestions. I couldn't figure out how to add a call to action to the first image so I rearranged the page to have a cta above the fold. Do you know how to add a button that isn't stuck to the center of the main image?

PageFly-Garcia
Shopify Partner
488 77 132

Hi @SwellNutrition Thank you for taking my suggestions into considerations. It will depend on each theme whether it haves that feature or not. In this case, I think your theme doesn't have it so you will have to adjust by code. Or another approach is using page builder app. 
Hope it helps!  

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