How can I improve my band T-shirt and poster store?

[MyHeavyNeeds]

Hey all,

I recently started my own website dedicated to band T-Shirts and Posters. I would appreciate it if you could go through my website, and tell me your thoughts. What is good, what I can improve on, and your personal opinions on my products and design. Don't hold back lol all criticism is welcome. I'd also like if you have any suggestions on how/what to improve. You can find my website at MyHeavyNeeds.us   or   https://myheavyneeds.us/

Appreciate it 🙏

[MyHeavyNeeds]

Hey Sandra,

Im not sure I understand. What specifically about the design is bad? I used black because it is easier for people to see and fits more my products as heavy/punk/grunge, where black and fluorescent colors are normally used, could you expand on your criticism please?

Thank you 🙂

[MyHeavyNeeds]

Hi Prad

Thank you so much for your suggestions. I'll definitely take them into account when making changes to my website. Appreciate you taking the time to look through and giving me some feedback. Any other suggestions or improvements you have in mind?

[PageFly-Kate]

Hi @MyHeavyNeeds,
This is Kate from PageFly - Shopify Landing Page Builder App. 

I admire the design of your store and believe that implementing a few easy CRO tips could further optimize your conversion rates. I'd love to go over these ideas with you here by:

1. Button text on the hero banner section

For a hero banner promoting a "Buy 2 Get 1 Poster" offer, the button text should be clear and action-oriented, directly related to the offer. "Our Tshirts" is a bit too general and doesn't highlight the special offer. You can consider changing it to: “Grab Free Poster Now" - This creates urgency and highlights the benefit directly.

2. Product images

Displaying product images with models on your homepage can significantly enhance its appeal. Consider incorporating more of these visuals to boost the attractiveness of your clothing store.

You can create a new section and Integrate social media into your store: to foster stronger connections with customers, boost brand recognition, and enhance the potential for increased sales. Like this:

3. Contact us section

I'm a bit puzzled because when I click on the email button, it takes me to the FAQs page where I can't find the answer I'm looking for. There also isn't a contact form for me to submit my query. Could you please add a contact form to this page for better assistance?

And please update the content here, it is default section now:

4. Resize for the footer

I realized that on there are some blank space on the footer, you can consider to add more information or range these sections again:

5. Issue on the product page

I realize that there is a short error message appearing when I hover over the product image, this must be an error from theme, you can check with theme support to fix that.

I hope my suggestions will provide you with valuable insights. Merry Christmas! 🎄✨

Wishing you continued success,

Kate - PageFly Team

[MyHeavyNeeds]

Hi Kate,

Thank you loads for your suggestions, I'll definitely implement them. I'm aware of the piece of code that it mixed up on the hover product pages, I'm looking into fixing that.

I really appreciate you taking the time, and thanks for helping me out 😀

[PageFly-Kate]

Hi @MyHeavyNeeds ,

I am so happy that my suggestions can be your solution.

Have a nice day and wishing you all the best!!!!

Kate

[nuerrify]

Hey @MyHeavyNeeds,

Cool site. My feedback is on how you can get more organic traffic to your site by making a few small changes. 

Try to find a list of high searched for terms that you are selling and then optimize each product page to rank higher for those terms. For example- the term "Pearl Jam tshirts" gets 3,600 searches per month on Google. Make sure to optimize that product page for this term. So add a Description H2 here: 

It can say "Pearl Jam Tshirts"

Underneath you can add a few lines about the band to add some more content. Add alt tags in the image around different ways people could search for this. If possible I would move the "unisex" to the end rather than in between Band name and tshirt. Same in the URL. 

Nirvana tshirt gets over 10,000+ searches per month but is too difficult to rank for, so I would skip that. Similarly, I would try to make your site look more authoritative and start ranking high for certain terms. For example the following list is easy to rank for and would be great to create blogs on (and you can link your products in these blogs as well!):

germany heavy metal bands (1,900 searches per month)

heavy metal bands of 2000s (1,600 searches per month)

heavy metal swedish bands (1,300 searches per month)

heavy metal mexican bands (720 searches per month)

british heavy metal bands (210 searches per month)

Just these 5 blogs could get you 5,700 impressions per month or 60K impressions per year. 

If you do this, you'll start getting more authority in Google's eyes and your site will start ranking high for other keywords automatically. Good luck!

[MyHeavyNeeds]

Hey Nuerrify,

Thanks for your feedback, i'll go over yor suggestions and implement them!

Appreciate you taking the time