Looking for feedback on my store! Would be much appreciated :)

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Hey guys looking for some feedback on my store, only just launched so would really appreciate any suggestions or a good review thank you 🙂


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Hi @Anonymous 

This is PageFly - Free Landing Page Builder. I would love to provide my recommendations for your store based on 6 years of providing solutions for about 100.000 active Shopify merchants.

I like how you have:

  • Clear homepage structure
  • Sticky navigation
  •  Good hero section showing exactly the product lines you guy offer.

 I also have some comments and suggestions for you to better your store: 

1. Rearrange homepage sections.

You have "Shop by Category" and "Our Services" sections showing what you are offering. These sections should be right under the benefit so customers know what they can expect from you. After that, a feature collection right after would be more logical

2. Feature collection section

Buttons in this section should be aligned with each other. You should consider adding secondary hover image to offer extra visual content for your potential customers

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3. Spacing

You might want to make the heading of each section bigger so customers won’t miss out on this. 

Furthermore, you should add more spacing between Shop Now button and the next section’s heading so that each section can separate from the one above and underneath it.

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4. Set bold for each section heading in Product description

- It could help your customer grab the information quicker and more efficient

- You can try to personalize the product page, this guide might help you

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5. Promotion incentive for holiday season

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Furthermore we have a group for people who loves and want to better the conversion rate: https://www.facebook.com/groups/cro.advocate.club you can join and get best tips and discussion there


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I love it! I love the color scheme. All ready for Christmas!!! Nice job!!!