Looking for feedback on my store! Would be much appreciated :)

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Hey guys looking for some feedback on my store, only just launched so would really appreciate any suggestions or a good review thank you


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You have a very nice store and easy to navigate. But I don't think you have integrate any sales funnel with the store. Since it's a new store, you don't have to jump into marketing just like that but to make the marketing strategy works for your store in order to get sales, you have to set up some back up strategies.
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Hi @joshsadler98 

This is PageFly - Free Landing Page Builder. I would love to provide my recommendations for your store based on 6 years of providing solutions for about 100.000 active Shopify merchants.

I like how you have:

  • Clear homepage structure
  • Sticky navigation
  •  Good hero section showing exactly the product lines you guy offer.

 I also have some comments and suggestions for you to better your store: 

1. Rearrange homepage sections.

You have "Shop by Category" and "Our Services" sections showing what you are offering. These sections should be right under the benefit so customers know what they can expect from you. After that, a feature collection right after would be more logical

2. Feature collection section

Buttons in this section should be aligned with each other. You should consider adding secondary hover image to offer extra visual content for your potential customers

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3. Spacing

You might want to make the heading of each section bigger so customers won’t miss out on this. 

Furthermore, you should add more spacing between Shop Now button and the next section’s heading so that each section can separate from the one above and underneath it.

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4. Set bold for each section heading in Product description

- It could help your customer grab the information quicker and more efficient

- You can try to personalize the product page, this guide might help you

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Hi, I visited your website. your products are very nice. Your web design is fantastic. I like them.

But I saw something, this may be helpful to get a higher conversion rate:

- add a best seller category 

- add realistic product images

- make videos to attract customers and increase time on site

- pop up chat and discount pop up

- Add reviews for each product (some Shopify review apps can help) and discounts to attract customers



- And don't forget to add JSON LD to your site to display your reviews on Google search by SEO app. (This SEO app I use 1 year: https://bit.ly/2YxoOYC)

- SEO: your mobile version is not good. Heading tags, Meta tags, keywords are not optimized. To handle this I usually use the above SEO app.



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Thank you and have a nice work!!!
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I love it! I love the color scheme. All ready for Christmas!!! Nice job!!!