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Hi guys and girls!


I really need some feedback and help on my website.

I'm not the best on designing websites and been really struggling on getting where I want to be.

I don’t want my website to look cheap and un trustworthy because I think this is effecting my sales.

I’m  getting traffic through it like a lot but no commitments.

Please help!

thank you in advance 



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Hi @Moosepaddleclot!

Here's some feedback for your store. 


  • Update all instances of paddleboarding to paddle boarding. (This will also be better for SEO.)
  • Add a unique unique value proposition above the fold. 

    “A value proposition is a promise of value to be delivered. It’s the primary reason a prospect should buy from you. It’s also the #1 thing that determines whether people will bother reading more about your product or hit the back button. On your site, your value proposition is the main thing you need to test—if you get it right, it will be a huge boost.”

Resources for value prop design

Value proposition worksheet
Value Proposition Design book

  • Replace the main image with an image of the new design. Screenshot below for context.

    Screen Shot 2021-04-28 at 5.58.04 PM.png
  • Once the image is replace, remove the "New Sunset Paddle boarding Design! Click here" link and replace it with a call-to-action button beneath the image. Update the call-to-action language to "Shop Newest Collection".

  • Update "Follow us on our adventure!" to "Join us on our adventure!" 

Product pages

  • Add copy to each product page in the form of storytelling (in addition to the product description). This is good practice for both SEO and conversions.

For example: on this product page on David's Teas for raspberry mojitos, the storytelling on the page is: "Is there any way to improve on fresh mint and tangy lime? Just add raspberries! Our juicy Raspberry Mojito iced tea is about to become your new go-to drink. It’s a bright pink tisane that’s fruity, minty and utterly refreshing. Served over ice with a splash of rum, this caffeine-free infusion tastes like a summer afternoon on a sunny Havana patio. In short, pure heaven."

Joanna Wiebe and Alaura Weaver share 11 storytelling elements:

A relatable protagonist/hero (your target customer)
A world (the emotional motivators)
A call to adventure (goal or problem to solve)
The stakes/refusal of the call (nightmare scenario)
A helper (your brand)
A magical item (your offer)
Crossing the first threshold (CTA)
The belly of the whale (onboarding/lead nurturing)
Road of trials (split-testing)
The happily ever after (future pacing)
The return (testimonials & brand advocacy)

  • Gather and share more social proof in the form of product video reviews written reviews, and photos from customers.

More than 50% of shoppers say online video has helped them decide which brand or product to buy (Google).
67% of shoppers turn to video at least once before making a purchase (Moz).

  • Consider offering free shipping on all products and just work shipping into product pricing. (Right now free shipping is only available in the UK. There may be some way to segment visitors.)

In a survey by Walker Sands Communications, 90% of people said that having an order ship for free is the biggest incentive to add more to their cart, while another survey found up to 74% of shoppers will abandon their cart if delivery fees are too high. More on that here.

  • Ensure that you don't display any products that are sold out unless customers can share their e-mail address to be notified when the item will be back in stock.

  • Ensure all photographs of products are in high-resolution. According to Justuno, 93% of consumers consider visual content to be the key deciding factor in a purchasing decision. 

  • Ensure that all products are shown in context. For example, provide photographs of customers wearing the organic sunset paddle boarding hoodie instead of just photos of the hoodie.

“About Us” page: 

  • Remove from the page: "Sorry, there are no products in this collection".
  • Also remove the "sort by" drop-down menu.
  • Talia Wolf shares 4 rules for creating a high-converting "About Us" page that I recommend double checking for your page:
    • Make it about the customer
    • Talk to your customer, not at them
    • Tell the story
    • Don’t just say it, show it


  • Ensure that your website meets the standards on Google Search Central.
  • For on-page SEO, add original, creative content to your home page and product pages.
  • For off-page SEO, get backlinks via partnerships, guest blogging, communities, social media.

Moz details Google SEO tips for 2021

  • Favicon optimization
  • Breadcrumb optimization
  • Meta descriptions
  • Numbers in titles
  • <title> boilerplate
  • FAQ and how-to schema
  • Relaunch top content
  • Increase internal linking
  • Update old content with new links
  • Remove unnecessary links
  • Mobile link parity audit
  • Invest in long-form content
  • Use more headers
  • Leverage topic clusters
  • Bring content out of tabs
  • Core Web Vitals
  • Limit sitemaps to 10,000
  • Leverage dynamic sitemaps
  • Passive link acquisition
  • Page-level link intersect
  • Be the last click

Also, I shared 21 e-commerce trends for 2021 in the Shopify community in case you also want to check that out.

CMO @ Reeview automatically finds, collects and displays authentic, user-generated product video reviews for Shopify stores. Using A.I. to manage user-generated videos at scale and beautiful video widgets placed directly where purchase decisions are made, Reeview increases conversions, shopper engagement and customer lifetime value.
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Hi @Moosepaddleclot,

Congrats on your new store, I have spent some time reviewing your store and want to give you some feedback, hope it would be helpful to you:

1. Images

This is the part that I really want to emphasise. Maybe the outlook of your store would be more attractive if you could create and use the images with high-quality. Especially, when your products are related to fashion, you have to pay more attention to the illustrations. Maybe you should try some images of your products on real models’ body to make it more trustworthy.


2. Header

The header takes too much space, therefore, when customers join your page, they are not able to see the products right away. I think you can edit the logo to a smaller size. Moreover, the featured image seems not very suitable for your “clothing brand”. This might make the customer confused.


One more thing you should consider is the colour contrast. These blue icons look not quite visible. Also, the navigation bar should be placed on the same row to avoid messed-up look.


3. Products 

The products should be placed in a reasonable position. I just think if you let the space as in the screenshot hereby, it might cause disorder.


4. Introduction

If you can add an image in the background for those texts, it might look more interesting. Anyway, the content should be shorten with core values, you can use bullets if possible.


5. CTAs

The CTA here should be placed in a button. Furthermore, the images should be full width and related to your brand.


6. Blog

This should be placed in the centre of the page!


7. Smaller logo


8. Footer

From my point of view, this sections should be exchanged in positions.


9. Maybe you should consider adding some testimonials to enhance your brand trust.

Above is my recommendation on your store. If you find it helpful please hit LIKE and MARK AS SOLUTION.

Best of luck!

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Hey @Moosepaddleclot,

Sorry to hear you haven't been getting the sales you had hoped for. I've taken a look through your store, hopefully my feedback will provide some insight as to what is happening.


When you are choosing colors, fonts, the overall look and feel of your website, you have to put personal preference aside and instead design your website around what would appeal to your target audience. If you want to add pops of color, it's best to do it on things like buttons, link colors and your navigation bar. When you start changing background colors and font colors, it quickly becomes too much and starts taking away from where the focus should be - on your products.

Store design is a topic we covered in our free training that is happening right now. You can click the Facebook link in my signature to join in, check day 3 for the replay. 

Next, your homepage banner. That main banner area is prime real estate for selling. We recommend having a professional photo of your products, a title introducing your brand or product,  a line of text underneath that expands on your title and a call to action button such as "Shop Now". Here is an example:


The last thing I want to touch on for now are your products.

Because you are a POD store, I'd recommend looking into alternative products to print on that would give you better profit margins. Hoodies and tshirts tend to be pretty costly and then adding shipping costs on top of that - it doesn't leave much for you. Your only choice is to price your product higher but then you run the risk of being priced too high to the point where you aren't getting sales.

When searching, compare Gooten, Printify and Printful for the best price so that you can offer your audience a great price and still be able to make a decent profit as well.


When you sell something as saturated as clothing, the issue you run into is that these types of items can be already be purchased offline in hundreds retail stores as well as online through thousands and thousands of online stores. So when a person is searching for a hoodie or a tshirt in Google, these big companies with massive marketing budgets are who is showing up in search results and who you are competing with for customers. A person can complete IF they give people a reason to purchase from them vs. the other guys. An example of this might be someone who makes shirts locally, their "reason" as to why you should purchase from them vs the other guy is because they are local and a lot of people are passionate about shopping local. For you, your designs are unique but the problem is being found so I would definitely recommend getting a solid marketing strategy in place.

I mentioned our training, well day 5 is all about ads and developing a profitable ad strategy (Day 5 is tomorrow).  Additionally, we also go over why stores get high traffic with no sales, spending on Ads with no return and visitors abandoning cart. Our free private Facebook training is happening now until April 30, we will be going live every day at 1:00PM (EST). You can sign up here. Really hope you join us! 

One last thing, you can expand your sales channels and promote your dropshipping products on Google Shopping using the AllFetch Google Shopping Feed app (it's free). It allows you to easily syncing your products from your Shopify store to the Google Merchant Center.

We hope our response was helpful, if it was, let us know by giving us a thumbs up and/or marking it as a solution!

Best of luck!

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Hello @MoosepaddleclotThis is AiTrillion- an All-in-one Marketing Platform on Shopify. I would love to share my thoughts for your store based on 9 years of experience with Shopify for over 1000's active Shopify merchants and hope that my sharing will help you improve your store performance.

You can also check the performance of our brands with AiTrillion here. Here are few suggestions:

The first fold of the website should always have a call to action in it - And here’s why; in most cases placing the CTA above the fold works wonders for your campaigns. This placement immediately draws your visitors’ attention to your CTA which is always good for conversions.

- Add testimonials or review carousel on the homepage.

- Make sure to use email marketing automation to reach your customers. Use triggers and workflows to automatically send messages to consumers after they take a specific action.

- You need to engage your visitors coming to your site by giving loyalty reward points which will increase repeat purchase and customer lifetime value. You can add a web push notification which will help you to retarget your customers anytime even when they are not in your store. This will help you to run your store smoothly and decrease the bounce rate and will capture your visitors and convert them into prospective or paying customers. You will be able to retain your customers for the long term.

Entice customers by giving them loyalty points on activities like sign up, leaving a review, allowing push notification, visiting a store, on birthdays, and more. This will help you to increase the email and push subscribers. You can then run email and push campaigns to reach your customers on the basis of customer behavior. This helps in increasing the conversion and retention rate.


Moreover, if you would like to implement the above customer engagement features/ marketing tools in your store I suggest you to install the 'All in one' Shopify app AiTrillion, a full-fledged marketing solution. It will help you to capture visitors coming to your store and will help in getting more conversions.

Hope this helps!

Sachin D | Shopify Growth Expert @ AiTrillion

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