Please leave feedback on my store, thanks!

[erlivingst]

www.toyboxadventures.com

[PageFly]

Hi @erlivingst,

This is PageFly - Free Landing Page Builder. I would love to provide my recommendations for your store based on 6 years of providing solutions for about 100.000 active Shopify merchants.

I like how you have:

- Impressive hero section with CTA button

Besides that, I have some comments and suggestions for you: 

1. Add sticky navigation

A sticky navigation bar will help customers navigate themselves from every part of the homepage to any page of your store more conveniently. You should add that to make your customers navigate your store more efficiently. 

Before you do that I'd also want to suggest you to minimize the store logo on the header, therefore the sticky part would not be so "thick" and cover the screen 

 2. Font 

Your font looks like it has error since you set bold for the first capital letter but not for the rest. Even though I know that's how it is but you can consider to make it look less random and more professional

3. Add collection heading

- You should add a collection heading there to avoid the tiny gap which makes the page look less visually pleasing

4. Have secondary hover images for the product list

• By presenting secondary hover images, customers can easily scan many products to see extra visual information. 

5. Add average ratings for each product

• ​​You should include both the user rating average and number of ratings on the product list items. This is one of the crucial elements for users’ purchasing decisions. They will rely on both to decide whether they should explore further a product.

6. Add section about your brand story

A brand story helps customers understand more about your business and also helps your store look more professional.

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