Please Review my store :)

7 0 2

Hello, I have recently updated my store . It would mean a-lot if you take a look and let me know if anything is missing.

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Shopify Partner
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Hello @IKanstyle 

Hope you are doing well.

Your store looks quite alluring and professional. I've gone through your store thoroughly and I must say I found the user experience very rich and friendly. The website has been designed very meticulously and I am sure, it will be a hit in no time. 

However, I'd like to mention some points:

  • The paragraph on the Home page is looking too big on the mobile (smaller devices). So try to reduce the size.
  • The pages are taking a bit more time to get loaded. (Maybe... Do check and try to fix it)
  • Secondly, there's one shortcoming: Product Descriptions are not proper. (They can be made more proper and a bit more attractive and specific)

You have such large product descriptions, which I am sure consumes a lot of your valuable time. And in the future, it will affect your strategies when you'll plan to expand your business. 

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7 0 2

Thank you very much. I've made all changes.

Shopify Partner
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Dear @IKanstyle , 

My name is Richard - CRO Expert at PageFly Free Page Builder. I have spent time to look at your store and leave some constructive comments. 

I really appreciate that the store is clear enough for customer to understand and scan through, and the store's theme quite fits with the products that you are selling. 
However, I believe things I mention bellow will help you to positively affect your sale volume. Hope that will give you some useful ideas.

1. You can consider to add more contents on your homepage to attract customers at the first glance when they visit your store:

  • Videos
  • Testimonials
  • Blog posts
  • Stories about your brand, or any inspirational stories
  • etc.


2You should make product categories the first level of the Main Navigation rather than putting them all on a catalog.
Showing categories on Main Navigation will allow your customers find products that fit their needs more effectively, and provide them an over view of your product categories right at the first glance when they enter your page.


3. Allow your customer finish their purchase without accessing product page by adding Buy Now button on your homepage and collection page.



4. This window overlaps filters. That impacts user experience.



5. More real images of real people are highly recommended. Shoper might really want to know how these products look on real faces.


I hope these recommendations will help. 
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Thank you.

Have a nice day then!


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