Revamped - Store Feedback 3 : Https://Foxdragondesigns.Com/

[foxdragon]

Hi All, 

this time I've got a pro. help to revamp my store site, appreciate if you review it, i'm still at no sales 😞 i'll be looking at ads now, any and all feedback is welcome 🙂

[Made4uo-Ribe · Accepted solution]

Hi @foxdragon 

I test your website, this is the result.

Also, you need to have marketing strategy to catch some costumers like putting some ads on the social media. 

Please don't forget to Like and Mark Solution to the post that helped you. Thanks!

[Made4uo-Ribe · Accepted solution]

Hi @foxdragon 

I test your website, this is the result.

Also, you need to have marketing strategy to catch some costumers like putting some ads on the social media. 

Please don't forget to Like and Mark Solution to the post that helped you. Thanks!

[foxdragon]

Cool tool, what is it please?

[PageFly-Kate · Accepted solution]

Hi @foxdragon,

It's Kate here from the PageFly Shopify Builder team. I can see you've put effort into building your store, and you've done a good job, especially with optimizing for mobile views. Great work on that front! However, as a CRO expert, I have some additional suggestions to further enhance your store's performance.

1. The hero banner.

Your hero banner has a lot in it. It's better to choose your top product and show only that in the banner. Each slide can show a different product type.

Plus, give more space to the "Shop Now" button, your CTA button. Currently, there's an image behind it. If you're thinking of running ads, be as specific as you can. 

2. Make an 'About Us' page or place it lower. Use the space to showcase your products. 

Customers usually spend about 38 seconds in an online store. Use this time to direct them to your top product recommendations.

3. Where are the hoodies, sweatshirts, and sportswear?

If they aren't your main products, why are they featured in the hero banners?

Remember, a high-converting online store isn't just about layout. It's also about organization and visual guides. This helps turn your visitors into customers.

4. Create more space to emphasize key sections.

Make sure visitors catch every detail of your store by giving them more space to absorb the information. Aim for about 70px between sections.

5. Focus on the details.

Mistakes are inevitable, but try to minimize them. Carefully review your content before it goes live on social media. For instance: 

• Correct "Autmn sale" to "Autumn sale."

• Choose a thumbnail for your Instagram GIF/video before posting.
• As mentioned earlier, add space between each section.

6. Maintain consistency

This applies to your fonts, image styles, and pretty much everything else.

7. Set up special sections for your promotions, instead of just showing them in the announcement bar.

Also, with Christmas and the year-end approaching, bring some festive feel to your store. For example:

• Freeship for leggings orders > $40 → Name it something like "Walk Easy: Free Shipping on $40+ Leggings" or "Stretch & Save: Free Shipping at $40."
• Autumn savings 25% for selected sweatshirts and hoodies → Try "Autumn Savings: 25% Off Select Sweatshirts & Hoodies."

Here are some templates for inspiration:

I hope you find these tips useful. If you do, please let me know with a thumbs-up or by marking it as a solution. Have a fantastic day ahead, and I wish you the best in your business endeavours. Keep up the good work!

Cheers, 

Kate | PageFly team