Store Feedback - Could you please review the overall design and landing page of my store?

[Gokul1]

Here is my store link.

[Bundler-Manuel]

Hi there @Gokul1  the landing page of your store is pretty cool and the images look high quality enough from my perspective. My suggestions for raising the level of your homepage would be to

- Add in some customer reviews

- Add a FAQs section

- Include some bundle packages on the site.

[Wendell4]

Hi @Gokul1

I have found out something which may be useful for your store page improvement and optimization. You can check what I shared below and optimize them properly. Thank you!

1. There is no H1 tag on your homepage. Your store design is indeed amazing, but after checking the source code page, the page structure is not so completed. Missing H1 will cause search engine bots failing to get the main title of the page and make Google feel confusing of the main topic on a page. It is better to select your main title on the homepage and set it as H1, so that it will be better for page indexing.

2. Some web pages have excessive meta description situation. You have done a great job on page meta title actually, but except meta description part. After optimizing meta description by shorten the length between 100–200 characters, your customers will see page details completely and get the highlight directly, and this will increase your sales and conversion in some ways.

3. This image on your homepage is lack of alt text content. It will affect Google from getting details precisely, better add it properly. Here is the image URL below, and you can double-check by editing from Shopify admin page properly.

https://mayvoria.com/cdn/shop/files/085c78bc-5eb9-46f7-8c06-4005d41a3c53.png?v=1750596503&width=3840

Moreover, it is recommended to do the SEO Check regularly on the store, so that you can see if the store pages meet SEO demand or not. For more details, you can click here to get it, as I used this checker on my store also, and it is helpful indeed, hope can make your store boost more sales in the future.

[BON_Loyalty]

Hi @Gokul1! This is Tracy from BON Loyalty, the customer loyalty solution designed specifically for Shopify businesses.

I took a look at your site, and I have to say, it looks fantastic! The neutral background is perfect for keeping the focus on your products, and the images clearly show the jeans from multiple angles (front, side, and back), which is great for helping customers visualize what they’re purchasing. However, there are a couple of areas where I think a few improvements could really elevate the user experience on your site.

1. Your Homepage feels a little short
The content on your homepage is a bit limited, and it's a bit too short to engage users as they browse. This might affect user experience and discourage deeper exploration of your site. To improve this, I’d recommend expanding the content to make the page feel more engaging and immersive. Here are a couple of ideas:

Brand Story: Share a brief section about your brand, what makes you unique, your mission, and your values.

Customer Testimonials: Add a section for reviews and ratings. This builds trust and encourages new customers to make a purchase.

2. Footer section needs some attention
Currently, your website's footer lacks information, and that could leave visitors with an incomplete experience. The footer is an important part of the site design, as it provides easy navigation and links to crucial info that visitors expect to see, like contact details, social media links, and legal pages. Adding a footer would definitely help improve the overall user experience. Here’s what you could consider adding:

- Social media links

- Menu links such as About Us, Contact, and Terms of Service

I hope these suggestions help improve your site’s trustworthiness and user engagement. Keep up the great work, and feel free to reach out if you need any further assistance. Wishing you all the best with your site!

[Ade_123]

Hey @Gokul1 You a clean, modern, but a little “mystery box.” The visuals are sleek, but your value proposition — that one-liner that tells me why I should care — is missing or hidden.

Good visual clarity
No instant hook / clear benefit promise

Above the Fold (Prime Real Estate)

What you should do:

• Add a clear headline: Tell me what you sell and why it matters. Example:

  “Luxury Skincare That Actually Works — Without the $200 Price Tag”
  Or
  “Glow Up, Guilt-Free: Effective Skincare for Modern Women”

• Supporting subtext: 1–2 lines expanding on what makes your brand unique. Ex:

  “Powered by real science and natural extracts. Backed by women who actually use it.”

• Call to Action: The CTA button should be attention-grabbing:
   “Shop the Collection”
  “Learn More” (feels passive)

What’s Working:

• Crisp, high-res visuals

• Product layout is clean and simple

• Site speed is decent

What Needs a Tweak:

1. Lack of Trust Builders:

   • No testimonials, reviews, or “as seen on” sections.

   • Add trust badges (SSL secure, 30-day return, fast shipping) right under the CTA or in the footer.

1. Too Few “Human Touches”:

   • Use UGC or real lifestyle photos of people using your product. Studio shots are clean, but alone they feel sterile.

   • People buy with emotion. Bring more human into the layout.

2. No Email Capture:

   • This is major. Build your list.

Add a pop-up or inline section like:

“Join the Mayvoria Glow Club — Get 10% Off + Exclusive Tips!”

• Your site looks solid on mobile. But add a sticky “Add to Cart” button — shoppers scroll fast on phones, and every extra tap kills conversions. 

You’ve got a sleek, solid foundation — but now it’s time to infuse emotion, urgency, and clarity to get that sweet conversion boost. Think of your store not as a catalog… but as a sales page disguised as a boutique.

Let me know if you want help writing a killer homepage headline or building your email funnel. You’re on the right track!