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What improvements can I make before launching my store?

sheadaddy1717
Excursionist
30 0 5

I am about to launch my store and I would appreciate any feedback/ constructive criticism.  thangs i can change.  than you in advance.

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PageFly-Garcia
Shopify Partner
452 74 128

This is an accepted solution.

 Hi @sheadaddy1717 

I am Garcia from PageFly - Shopify Advanced Page Builder App. I love your products so much. From my CRO expertise, I have some feedback for your Store and hope that they can help you increase the design.

Home page

Consider to change the hero banner

Right now the 3 models don't have connection with the products on the right side. You can consider this sample:

PageFlyGarcia_0-1702543122601.png

Add more featured collections on Home page

Some collections may contain your most popular or high-margin products. Displaying them prominently can encourage visitors to explore and make purchases.

You can refer this example:

PageFlyGarcia_1-1702543133526.png

Have a Secondary Hover Image

Including a secondary hover image provides an interactive element to your website. When users hover over a product or element, they get an immediate visual response, making the browsing experience more engaging.

PageFlyGarcia_2-1702543140945.png

Highlight core product and brand features

Have to say this again: I love your products as natural ingredients. So let’s showcase your core product and brand features, you quickly communicate what sets your products apart and what your brand stands for. It can be information about your materials (eco-friendly, sustainable,...), how you pack your order or how to apply your products by a video. 

Product page

  • Highlight key function on product description:
    You can display some ingredients in images and using bold style for the text to make the key features more outstanding
  • Add more product images:
    + Close-Ups of Texture cream
    + Product in Use: Display the appliance in a real-world setting to help customers visualize how it would fit into their daily lives. 

PageFlyGarcia_4-1702543161845.png

Prepare for Christmas

  • Utilize countdown timers to instill a sense of urgency for time-sensitive offers or flash sales, effectively encouraging conversions.
  • Provide customers with the option of gift wrapping during the checkout process, making it hassle-free for those purchasing presents for loved ones.
  • Offer exclusive holiday promotions, discounts, or special deals to entice customers. buyers.PageFlyGarcia_5-1702543179415.png
 

Hope it helps! 
Garcia

Please let me know if it works by giving it a Like or marking it as a solution!


PageFly - #1 Page Builder for Shopify merchants.


All features are available from Free plan. Live Chat Support is available 24/7.

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sheadaddy1717
Excursionist
30 0 5

Thank  you

PageFly-Garcia
Shopify Partner
452 74 128

This is an accepted solution.

 Hi @sheadaddy1717 

I am Garcia from PageFly - Shopify Advanced Page Builder App. I love your products so much. From my CRO expertise, I have some feedback for your Store and hope that they can help you increase the design.

Home page

Consider to change the hero banner

Right now the 3 models don't have connection with the products on the right side. You can consider this sample:

PageFlyGarcia_0-1702543122601.png

Add more featured collections on Home page

Some collections may contain your most popular or high-margin products. Displaying them prominently can encourage visitors to explore and make purchases.

You can refer this example:

PageFlyGarcia_1-1702543133526.png

Have a Secondary Hover Image

Including a secondary hover image provides an interactive element to your website. When users hover over a product or element, they get an immediate visual response, making the browsing experience more engaging.

PageFlyGarcia_2-1702543140945.png

Highlight core product and brand features

Have to say this again: I love your products as natural ingredients. So let’s showcase your core product and brand features, you quickly communicate what sets your products apart and what your brand stands for. It can be information about your materials (eco-friendly, sustainable,...), how you pack your order or how to apply your products by a video. 

Product page

  • Highlight key function on product description:
    You can display some ingredients in images and using bold style for the text to make the key features more outstanding
  • Add more product images:
    + Close-Ups of Texture cream
    + Product in Use: Display the appliance in a real-world setting to help customers visualize how it would fit into their daily lives. 

PageFlyGarcia_4-1702543161845.png

Prepare for Christmas

  • Utilize countdown timers to instill a sense of urgency for time-sensitive offers or flash sales, effectively encouraging conversions.
  • Provide customers with the option of gift wrapping during the checkout process, making it hassle-free for those purchasing presents for loved ones.
  • Offer exclusive holiday promotions, discounts, or special deals to entice customers. buyers.PageFlyGarcia_5-1702543179415.png
 

Hope it helps! 
Garcia

Please let me know if it works by giving it a Like or marking it as a solution!


PageFly - #1 Page Builder for Shopify merchants.


All features are available from Free plan. Live Chat Support is available 24/7.

sheadaddy1717
Excursionist
30 0 5

Garcia,

 

Thank you so much for all of the suggestions!!! How did you make the picture with the models and the products?

 

PageFly-Garcia
Shopify Partner
452 74 128

Hi @sheadaddy1717 
You are welcome! You can made those images by Canva and remove its background if need to by any online BG remove tool such as https://www.remove.bg/ ...
Hope it helps! 

Please let me know if it works by giving it a Like or marking it as a solution!


PageFly - #1 Page Builder for Shopify merchants.


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