Hey there i have recently redesigned my store my ads are doing really well i have a campaign setup just to warm up my meta and its getting 8%ctr and $5 Per initiate checkout, Although i got 9 of them today no on has actually purchased ( i don’t have purchases to move forward to purchase campain at this stage) Here is my website Maarten™ gFlow X100 – Stay Cool. Keep Moving.
Please share your thoughts on how i can improve my store and Please be specific thanks a lot!
Putting that much work into something is always commendable. This, however, is the wrong thing to put your effort in. It’s not your product and it’s not designed in New Zealand as you claim. I’m sure you will get a couple sales out of it. Is it going to be worth the effort? Probably not. Definitely not worth the headache of bank charge-backs, refund demands, and overall appearance of fraud. My suggestion is to stop immediately and re-evaluate your decision of marketing this product as your own.
Hey man thanks but no i will not give up and this product dose work as i have made sales with it before. I wont be giving up sounds like im stealing your product and you want me of the market
There’s no doubt you are stealing. And you should know it’s very easy to report fraudulent merchants. Shopify doesn’t mess around with copyright, trademark, IP, and physical theft. They do investigate and shut down merchant accounts all the time. It’s actually in your best interest, and not mine, to quit while you’re ahead. Believe me, it would benefit me more if they shut you down permanently.
Bro its drop shipping obviously and my prodcut is a real prodcut. i acctualy sell what i have lsited man the thing is its on sale as well but they arent black mine is the only black one hence why it seems origonal
Thank you for more evidence. Of course it’s drop-shipped. And simple copy and paste wasn’t enough for you. You are clearly trying to deceive people into thinking it’s your own creation, design, etc.
Wouldnt that be the case with every other store?
HI @planb9387
First, this is interesting discussions, and hope you can learn from it. To me drop-shipping is hard, while it is easy to set products up. But it is often advertised “winning product” like the choice of products is only thing that matters, well it is not. It should be decent but more importantly that you built trust and credibility on your store. And I think honest presentation is better then marketing, big-sounding words. Check this great post from @tim_1
So for example in FAQ "Unlike generic fans, Maarten products combine engineering precision with a luxury lifestyle persona. The gFlow X100 is sleek, durable, and built to feel like premium gear. This small part is full of marketing BS.
Have order a samples, checked yourself how it works for a week or two? Give to family and friends to check and give honest opinion? That is where you get a base for description and feedback that you can put on site. For example “Solid build, just works” it is not and Apple product that is made with engineering precision and it is premium and not “feels like, but it is not premium”.
Also to be original, “only black hence original” 
you could make your own product images, without AI. For example check
And to give you some feedback on new changes: “Get 2 gifts” should be centered feel of like that. But there you should really think one more time, "Life Time Protection " that sounds like marketing again but are you really ready to sell product once and then every 2-3 years, “at best” give replacements to everyone, even when you stop selling those ?
To me that promotion is still biggest red flag, beside fake reviews, does it really ends today? Will you sell it tomorrow for full price? Buy 2 for big discount? Will you ship that? That part looks like the most scammers/fake stores.
And finally, this is a long post, but hope you learn in general what works with customers and what do not. You can choose different products, make new stores but try not to trick customers, most will see through it.
Good luck.
Thanks so much man seriously, I will implement all of these steps straight away
Hi @planb9387 ,
Your ads are strong (8% CTR, good ICs), but your product page needs CRO fixes:
These quick changes should help turn those checkouts into purchases.
i think you have shared your product page’s URL. i am assuming you want feedback for it. there are several areas, where you can definitely improve:
overall, i would say focus on making the page and its structure more professional. viewers might be clicking on your ad, but when they land on the page, they wouldn’t be entirely satisfied with the product page content, thereby bouncing off quickly.
as a best practice, check shopify’s blogs on best store and product page designs. you will get a lot of insights for improving these elements.
Hey there check my store out now stll working on it but i think your gona be stoked!
