I would like some feedback on my store. I have new clothing to add this month and gifts for Xmas
I am working on social marketing and paid adds too
thanks
A store owner seeks feedback on their clothing and Christmas gift shop before adding new inventory. Multiple experts identified critical technical and design issues requiring immediate attention.
Critical Issues:
Key Recommendations:
Homepage & Navigation:
Collection Pages:
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Status: Discussion remains open with actionable feedback provided but no response yet from the store owner.
I would like some feedback on my store. I have new clothing to add this month and gifts for Xmas
I am working on social marketing and paid adds too
thanks
check the link you send there issue with it
Hi @Literally ,
This is Kate from PageFly - Shopify Free Landing Page Builder. That’s good for preparing for Christmas sales from now.
I have just had a look at your store. Your store is well-organized but I would love to provide my recommendations for your store so that it may gain more sales. May it help!
1. Improve the header and announcement bar
Make the header smaller to improve UX and make room for other key content
Improve your announcement bar with a countdown timer and make it sticky: I notice that currently, you are running on a promotion, you can consider adding a countdown timer as an announcement bar for limited-time offers to create a sense of urgency and drive conversions. Also it’s important to make it sticky even when scrolling down to keep reminding visitors about the promotion. You can take this as a reference:

2. Revise your hero banner
The banner is very significant in hero material. It is the first thing customers see when they visit your website. Let’s get consumers to know exactly what you’re having in 5 seconds first. Your current banner does not show off what you sell, does not attract customers, and the CTA button is hidden:
Consider adding a symbol logo beside your store name now. It’s easy to catch customer’s eyes and display in a small area.
Under your hero banner, the background images with product images can help merchants can quickly recognize what the store sells.
3. Fix the mistakes
You should check all pages and make sure the page is responsive on all devices. Here are some mistakes I found so that you can fix them:
On the product image:
Don’t forget to check mobile view too:
4. Add more content on your homepage
Besides building attractive and powerful pages, you should spend time focusing on marketing strategies too. Let me know if you have any questions.
Good luck and have a nice day! Cheers!
Hi @Literally ,
I’m Tracy from BON Loyalty, the top-rated Shopify loyalty app.
I’m delighted that you’ve reached out to the community, and I’m excited to offer my insights based on my experience. It’s always great to see passionate business owners seeking ways to enhance their store’s performance. My suggestions below mainly focus on your current collection page’s structure, as I believe there are a few things we can improve here:
1. Optimize the size of the hero image and banner
As I check here, the current hero image at the top is quite large, which pushes the products down. Visitors cannot see the products right away, but they have to scroll down in order to see them because of the big hero image, which is not user-friendly. Consider reducing the hero image height or using a banner with a text overlay that highlights collection-specific details, promotions, or offers.
2. Improve empty space management
3. Increase product listing density
As currently shown, there’s only one, or a few product cards on the entire page, which creates a significant amount of white space around it. Even if there are only a few products in the collection, consider implementing one or more of the following strategies:
4. Use engaging visual elements
If there are only a few products in the collection, add visual elements like banners, collection descriptions, or icons to fill in the empty spaces and make the page more visually dynamic. This could include:
5. Optimize filter and sort pptions
I hope that these suggestions can be helpful for you to optimize your store’s interface and user experience. Good luck!
If you find these suggestions helpful for you, please let me know by giving BON Loyalty a ‘LIKE’ or marking it as a ‘SOLUTION’.
Best,
Tracy from the BON Loyalty team