Hi @Halfmoonclothing
Welcome to the community.
First tip, is always search the community for advice, there are a lot of topics with the same issues and solutions that you can apply to your store.
And I know it must be hard to launch a store and not use dropshipping. But to me, that is the right way, and you did a pretty good job for a start. The theme is mostly fine, with good colors, and a logo. Product images could be better, but if I’m not mistaken, those are taken by you, so they are unique.
You do need a bit more text, content on the collection and product page. Will not repeat good tips @Moeed mentioned, but your homepage could use a bit more work. For example second section could use icons to grab attention more. And I think the first 3 sections on the About page could go to the homepage and split the products sections, maybe remove a few. Reduce the size of some.
Your menu is solid, but it needs About us link, instead of a size guide. Footer add 2 more menu blocks and make a transparent log with bright text.
Product pages need a bit more customer reassurance, one section with icon text, then shipping information, maybe offer some bundles.
And Ilike how you put “Is this a scam site?” but who would say yes to that?
But you do need more trust signal and one of them is for sure your contact information. I just found an Outlook email, and that is not near enough information. Plus it does not look professional, and yo ushould setup email on your domain. But it lacks address, phone, business name, maybe registration or tax numbers.
And I know it is 2 weeks but for a regular store, that is really an early start. Have some patience, but do not spend a lot on ads. Besides Facebook do use TikTok and Instagram. And those 200 visits a day, do you track on Google Analytics? They could be mostly bots, crawlers, and not many real people.
Lastly, I have to advertise our app a bit, feel dirty to do so here but still
You have popup that most will close but it acctually have a good deal and should help you more. Then you have two lines of announcement, OK, but it pushes content a bit and then gets hidden. Hero banner is big but what abotu other pages. If you have time, please check our Atomato app Atomato - Smart storefront notifications without popups | Shopify App Store for a better way to present important messages to customers.
Good luck, and I am sure sales will come.