Hey folks,
I need feedback on my store. I’ve gone over it myself but im not an expert, and id like some constructive feedback before we get real traffic. Thanks!
Hey folks,
I need feedback on my store. I’ve gone over it myself but im not an expert, and id like some constructive feedback before we get real traffic. Thanks!
Thanks for reaching out to the community.
Here are some points:
I noticed that you are using the Horizon theme and you have a lot of design work to do to make the site more catchy.
Hope the above feedback will be helpful.
Hi @Gocozyy
Homepage Feedback:
Products Section:
Trust & Conversion:
UX Issues:
Footer:
Best regards,
Devcoder ![]()
hey @Gocozyy you did a great job but you can do make more attractive store
i think it is your first time to design or develop a store so feel free if you have any question about it
Hi, @Gocozyy
I took a look at your site, and you’re actually in a pretty good place already-the product idea is strong. At this stage, it’s mostly about improving clarity, bringing in the right traffic, and smoothing out the user experience.
Here are a few areas that should make the biggest difference:
Add structured sections:
This helps visitors quickly understand what the product is and where they’d use it.
2.Improve product page conversion structure
Your product is visually strong, but needs clearer decision triggers.
Above the fold (top section), add:
To bring real traffic beyond ads/social, you need supporting content.
Create simple blog/pages like:
Then internally link them directly to your product page. This helps you rank for parenting + travel intent keywords, not just your brand name.
Compress and convert all images to WebP
Reduce or defer third-party apps/scripts
Remove unused Shopify apps that add script weight
Once these changes are in place, you should start seeing better engagement, smoother navigation on mobile, and improved conversion rates as users understand the product much faster.
For the speed part, if you don’t want to manually go through all the scripts and images, tools like Website Speedy can also help handle a lot of that optimization automatically though it is optional to use.
Disclaimer : We are the developers of the Website Speedy.
the product is actually really cool, illustrated map blankets for kids is a strong concept. but the homepage isn’t selling the experience at all. you need a hero shot of a kid actually using the blanket, spread out on the floor playing with it or bundled up in a car seat with it. right now it reads more like a product catalog than a brand.
also the USP needs to hit harder in the first 3 seconds. “screen-free play” is your biggest angle for parents right now, so lead with that. put it in the hero, make it impossible to miss. and tighten up the spacing between sections, there’s a lot of dead space that makes people scroll without finding a reason to stop.