small number of visitors only for first page , 0 orders yet , although ad are there

it’s been a while since i opened my store i did my best to work with it and took my time trying enhance it . but until now i didn’t get not a single sale also after i payed some ads i only get 3O visit per day and they all leave from the first page . I’m getting really frustrated ,and i dont know what to do more ?

if any one can help it will be awesome

My store : Sidewidesale.store

Hi there @sitewidesale Before I drop suggestions, you made a mistake in the store URL link you shared in the post so you should edit the side to site*
The images on the site appear to be very top quality but the store design and appeal overall comes off as being very bland. From the collections presentation to even the customer reviews on the homepage. I’d highly recommend you add a bit more color and liveliness to the homepage as it influences customers opinion on the store very early on.
Add sections for best sellers on the homepage and also add some FAQs on the homepage as well.

I believe that working on these suggestions would be a good starting point

Hi @sitewidesale
I waited for more than 1 minute and the store did not respond
I think this is the biggest problem right now and you need to fix it as soon as possible

Sorry it’s my fault , I wrote it wrong it’s sitewidesale.store not side .

Hi @sitewidesale

You should spend time to learn about SEO
It is one of the essential elements for an effective sales website
https://prnt.sc/JKwra_I8FHlX
As in this picture, the meta title tag is not up to standard and the meta description is missing.

This means that the SEO of this website is not good

If you are a newbie and do not know anything about SEO
I suggest you use the Seo Suilt application
link here

There are many free features that you can use at a basic level for your store
If you need more information about SEO, you can ask the app’s support team

Hope you sell more and more soon.

Hey @sitewidesale

I totally understand how frustrating it can be when you’re putting in effort and not seeing the sales come through. I’m Kate, a CRO expert from PageFly - Shopify Landing Page Builder.

From what you’ve described, it sounds like your visitors aren’t moving past the first page, so let’s break this down and find solutions together.

HOMEPAGE

Header & Navigation (Top Bar & Menu)

What’s Good:

  • The promo bar with a discount code for first-time customers is great for encouraging purchases.
  • Free shipping over $60 is a strong incentive.

What Needs Improvement:

  • The repetitive text in the top bar (“WELCOME! | SITEWIDE SALE | FREE SHIPPING…”) makes it look cluttered. Instead, use one strong message, such as:
    “Enjoy 15% Off Your First Order – Use Code SWS15 | Free Shipping on Orders Over $60”
  • The navigation bar has French & English mixed (“Accueil” vs. “Catalogue” & “Contact”). This inconsistency may confuse visitors.

Hero Section (First Impression Matters)

What’s Good:

  • The banner is high-quality, and the model fits the brand’s aesthetic.
  • The CTA (Show More) is visible.

What Needs Improvement:

  • The “Show More” button is vague—it doesn’t create urgency or clearly state what the user will see next.
  • The text lacks a strong selling point—it should focus on what makes the brand/products unique.

:hammer_and_wrench: Fix:

  • Change the CTA to “Shop the Collection” or “Discover Now” for better clarity.
  • Add a value-driven tagline, such as:
    “Trendy, High-Quality Fashion for Every Occasion – Shop Now & Express Yourself.”

Product Sections (Homepage Collection)

What’s Good:

  • The product images are clean and visually appealing.
  • Discount labels (“Save 15%”) make deals stand out.

What Needs Improvement:

  • The product titles are too generic—they don’t create emotional appeal or urgency.
  • Prices are not clearly structured—strikethrough pricing should be more visible.
  • The “Tout afficher” button is in French, which is inconsistent.

:hammer_and_wrench: Fix:

  • Improve product titles, e.g., instead of “Two-Piece Tracksuit Set”, try:
    :fire: Cozy Chic Two-Piece Tracksuit – Limited Stock!
  • Ensure pricing is bold & clear:
    $33.00 $39.00
  • Change “Tout afficher” to “View All” or ensure language consistency.

Social Proof (Customer Reviews)

What’s Good:

  • Real customer testimonials add trust.

What Needs Improvement:

  • The review section is too low—it should be closer to the product section.
  • The lack of star ratings makes it less visually engaging.

:hammer_and_wrench: Fix:

  • Move reviews higher up, just below featured products.
  • Add star ratings under each review to enhance credibility.
  • Consider adding photo reviews if possible.

PRODUCT PAGE

I took this product page for example: https://sitewidesale.store/products/summer-v-neck-ribbed-knit-crop-top-sleeveless-turndown-collar-in-10-colors

Product Title & Pricing Section

What’s Good:

  • The title is descriptive and includes important details (V-neck, ribbed, sleeveless, turndown collar).
  • There’s a discount (from $13.00 to $11.00) which makes the price look appealing.

What Needs Improvement:

  • The title is too long and could be more engaging.
  • The price contrast is weak—the strikethrough price is too small.
  • No urgency to encourage immediate action.

:hammer_and_wrench: Fix:

  • Shorten & improve the title for better readability & engagement.
    Current: “Summer V-Neck Ribbed Knit Crop Top - Sleeveless Turndown Collar in 10 Colors.”
    Better:" :fire: Summer Ribbed Knit Crop Top – Trendy & Comfy! :cherry_blossom: "
  • Make the discount stand out by enlarging the strikethrough price and adding:
    “Limited Time Offer – Save 15% Today!”

Call-to-Action (CTA) – “Add to Cart” Button

What’s Good:

  • The button is large and prominent.
  • The contrast (red color) makes it stand out.

What Needs Improvement:

  • “Ajouter au panier” (French) inconsistent with English store layout.
  • No urgency or trust signals near the button.

:hammer_and_wrench: Fix:

  • Change to “Add to Cart – Limited Stock!”
  • Add small trust badges/icons( :check_mark: Secure Payment, :rocket: Fast Shipping, :fire: 24H Customer Support).

Product Images & Variants

What’s Good:

  • High-quality images showcasing different angles & colors.
  • The color options are visually clear.

What Needs Improvement:

  • No image of the product in a lifestyle setting (e.g., someone wearing it in daily life).
  • No zoom function for better product inspection.

:hammer_and_wrench: Fix:

  • Add one lifestyle image (model wearing it in an everyday setting).
  • Enable hover-to-zoom for better product inspection.

Social Proof & Reviews

What’s Good:

  • 375+ reviews = excellent trust factor.
  • Featured customer testimonials with photos.

What Needs Improvement:

  • No UGC (User-Generated Content) like real customer photos.
  • No star rating below the title for instant credibility.

:hammer_and_wrench: Fix:

  • Add photo reviews from customers under the main gallery.
  • Move the star rating & review count next to the title for immediate trust.
  • Use AI-generated summaries (“87% of buyers say this top fits perfectly!”)

FAQ Section

What’s Good:

  • Covers important pre-purchase concerns (body types, weather suitability, care instructions).
  • The accordion format keeps it clean.

What Needs Improvement:

  • No size guide chart—customers might hesitate.
  • The answers are too text-heavy.

:hammer_and_wrench: Fix:

  • Add a visual size chart to avoid confusion.
  • Use icons & bullet points for quick reading.

“Why Choose Us” & Trust Signals

What’s Good:

  • The comparison chart (“Our Brand vs. Others”) is excellent.
  • Trust icons like Secure Checkout & Satisfaction Guarantee help build credibility.

What Needs Improvement:

  • The trust section is too low—many visitors won’t scroll that far.
  • The “Why Choose Us” section is text-heavy—users skim, so they might ignore it.

:hammer_and_wrench: Fix:

  • Move trust badges higher, near the “Add to Cart” button.
  • Add shorter, bolder statements:
    Premium Quality – Ultra-soft & stretchy
    :rocket: Fast Shipping – Arrives in 5-7 days
    :fire: Loved by 1,000+ Happy Customers!

I’d love to hear your thoughts after making these tweaks! Feel free to share updates, and I’ll be happy to provide more guidance if needed. You got this! :rocket: :flexed_biceps:

Wishing you all the success with your store! :blush:

Warm regards,

Kate | CRO Expert at PageFly - Shopify Landing Page Builder

Wow you are really awesome and you took the time detailing it ,that’s so helpful . thank you so much and for the frensh & english part , the store is based in france and also i build the site in french language so i think the translating app is not really working the best . but overall thank you so much for the detailed answer , thats realy helpful . I will try my best to work that out .