Hello everyone,
I’m a new member here, and I would be happy to hear your feedback on my landing page and any suggestions for improvement. 2 Pcs Car Seat Gap Plug Strips - Landing – Sirym Store
Thank you!
Just one quick question.
How hard would it be to create a product for your store that is not dropshipped and has original content? 
Hello, first of all I would like to thank you for your response and for your interest in helping others.
I have a conversion problem as most visitors come from Facebook ads, but almost no conversions. I understand that the problem comes from my landing page. I tried to put the necessary information to make it attractive but I still need to get the opinion of the experts. thank you so much
I'll turn the simple question back to you: would it be difficult to help others courteously and without being arrogant?
Not arrogant at all. It’s just a question. A nice one at that. If you choose to take offense, that’s your own issue. You are here seeking feedback. That is my feedback. A contemplative thoughtful question that challenges the copy/paste norm that we see fail time and time again.
Let’s start on the right foot.
To answer your question, I’d like to clarify first that I only have about one week of experience in this field. My current strategy is to start with dropshipping mainly to learn the ropes and get familiar with the tools and processes involved.
Creating my own product is definitely something I’d like to do in the short or medium term, depending on how fast I learn. However, at the moment, I don’t yet have the know-how to move forward confidently without a clear plan or the necessary skills.
That said, thank you for the well-phrased question. I’m choosing to take it positively and see it as a challenge to rise to.
Your store looks like it was a rush job.
Looks like you just copied all the photos, slapped it on the page with no organization at all and hope someone bites. When i first clicked on your link, i thought it was one of those annoying ad pop ups.
You may want to consider also getting a domain as well.
Hi,
First, I would like to thank you for the attention you have given to my page. Second, I will take into consideration all the advice you give me to move forward. And it is with great pleasure that I reply to you. Thank you again.
Thank you for your encouragement, it’s very motivating. I’ll try to do it in the near future, just to give myself some time to adapt.
Hello, thank you very much for all the advice. I have to admit you’re right — it was done a bit quickly. I told myself I would improve it step by step, but after looking at other stores, I realize that mine is a bit disorganized. I’ll do my best to make it better in a short amount of time.
As for the domain, that’s a very good idea and I’ll definitely do it. Thank you again.
Hi @sirymstore
Welcome to the community. And I give this advice to evry new member, search this community and learn from others. For example, search for “no seals”, “zero sales”, and “store feedback”. Thereare a lot of tips that you can apply to your store.
And you did ask just for a landing page, so I will start with that. First, not sure why you created a separate page, you could just make a different product page template. But Ok.
- Your title is too close to the announcement bar; please add some space.
- Then on left product image and on the right product video, and below that block the same video, too much for me. Classic layout works bets, image/video on left text (product info) on the right
- That review stars block looks fake, I mean there you have 20000 and then later section shows just 30. Maybe it is from the supplier, but be honest and mention that.
- next to vide there is a text andit is French but on image there is English and a few more blocks mixed language. I know for Canada that is fine but still try to stick to one, but have noth translations
- Below add-to-cart button there are 3 similar styled blocks, like buttons but they are not. It is good that you have that there for customer reassurance but maybe try with icons and text and not to look like a button.
Now a global issue I have with your store:
- you have no proper domain, I know you are starting but for me, if you can not invest in domain, then I would not bother with store. As in most cases, on myshopify subdomain there are just developer/test stores for demos or development, and also scam store who do not waste money on domain, There are not much rel, legit businesses that work and have sales.
- next thing, you have no log, no menu, no collections, maybe inthe future but organise products and navigation so the customer can find products they want quickly
- For trust, I always try to check contact information, and while yours are a bit hidden, in Ters there is a Gmail email, and some address. And like one other member said, “if Isee a Gmail I think scammers first” so not professional. And having your own domain have benefit of having an email from your domain too. And address, looks like a residential building not comercial so some might think it is fake. Plus, no business information, registration number is optional but a plus, no phone. So let me ask you, would you leave your credit card and personal information to store that gives that kind of constant information? Even if by some miracle I do end up on your store, as there are hundreds of others, why would Ibuy from you? Think like that and improve your store.
Good luck, I know it is start and you have a lot to learn but keep going.
hey @sirymstore share the Correct URL of your website so i can suggest you
Hello,
There’s nothing more to say — your feedback is truly valuable, and I completely agree with you. I’ll make sure to work more on these points. Many thanks.
Hello, your comment from the last time stood out to me and I kept reading it and rereading it because it had such an effect on me, it makes me so happy that there are people like you who go out of their way for others, so I changed everything to move forward by taking into consideration all your advice, and here I am back for a new request for advice on my website [```
I leave it to you to tell me how you find the result of so much effort made by myself. Thanks a lot
Hello, your comment from the last time stood out to me and I kept reading it and rereading it because it had such an effect on me, it makes me so happy that there are people like you who go out of their way for others, so I changed everything to move forward by taking into consideration all your advice, and here I am back for a new request for advice on my website [```
I leave it to you to tell me how you find the result of so much effort made by myself. Thanks a lot
Hi, @sirymstore
I checked your Pagespeed report and your LCP is under 3s, so overall performance is in a good range. If it still feels slow, it’s usually because important elements like images are loading late, even if the page itself isn’t technically slow.
Here’s how you can improve it :
1.Stronger first impression (hero section)
Right now, visitors need to instantly understand the benefit.
Make the problem + solution very clear in the first screen, and keep one strong CTA.
2. Add a quick demo
For this type of product, a short video or GIF showing it in use can significantly improve conversions.
3. Improve trust signals
Since it looks like a newer store:
- Add a few real reviews (photos help a lot)
- Make shipping/returns clearly visible
- Add a simple guarantee
- Make the CTA more visible
Repeat it across the page and consider a sticky Buy Now on mobile.
Your speed is already in a good place, so I’d shift focus to conversion (messaging, visuals, and trust)- that’s where you’ll see the biggest improvement.
If you do decide to optimize further, especially around images or scripts, you can either handle it manually or use tools like Website Speedy to make it easier.
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for a single-product landing page like this, the structure should be: hero image/video showing the problem being solved, then immediately the product as the fix, then social proof, then CTA. don’t make people scroll through paragraphs of text before they can buy.
also for a product like this the before/after sells itself. show the gross gap full of crumbs and coins, then the clean sealed gap. that visual does more than any copywriting. keep it simple and scannable on mobile because most of your traffic from ads is landing on phones.
Hi, @sirymstore
- The website has a clean and modern visual design, and the branding direction is already quite clear.
- The hero section could communicate more clearly:
- what the product/service is
- who it is for
- what makes it different
- The site currently feels more design-focused than conversion-focused. Consider adding:
- customer testimonials
- case studies
- brand story
- social media content
- The CTA buttons could stand out more, and the content hierarchy could be improved for better readability.
Your landing page looks very clean and professional! To push your conversion rate even higher, I’d suggest making your “Add to Cart” button more prominent with a high-contrast color and adding a few more trust badges or customer reviews directly beneath the main product image to build immediate credibility.
Since landing pages thrive on urgency and clear value propositions, you should also consider adding visual badges to highlight your offer. Using Deco Product Labels is a great way to add eye-catching “Bestseller” or “Limited Offer” tags directly to your product images, which helps grab attention and guide visitors toward a purchase much faster
For this kind of single-product landing page, I would focus less on adding more sections and more on making the first 5 seconds clearer.
The product solves an annoyance, so the copy should name the annoying moment immediately, then prove the fix is simple.
A structure I would test:
1. Headline = problem + outcome.
2. Subheadline = compatibility / installation detail.
3. Above-the-fold proof = short review, return policy, or photo showing the gap before and after.
4. CTA = action plus low-risk reassurance.
Example:
Before: “2 Pcs Car Seat Gap Plug Strips”
After: “Stop keys, crumbs, and phones from disappearing between your car seats — installs in seconds, fits most front seats.”
That rewrite uses loss aversion (prevent losing things), concreteness (keys/crumbs/phones), and effort anchoring (installs in seconds). If you can add one real review beside it, you also get social proof without making the page feel pushy.
I would also test the button copy. “Buy now” is okay, but “Keep my seat gap clean” or “Add the 2-pack to cart” connects the action to the benefit.
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