Good work @jennybee . It looks better for sure. The product images look more tempting to me and sure as heck if there is a video it would increase the chance of getting a conversion
However, you might want to make the product description in the product detail shorter and focus on product spec and add a new section with longer sales content. It would be better.
Putting everything in the product description might wear your potential customers out.
This is an example if you want a good reference of what I’m saying: https://www.allbirds.com/products/womens-wool-runner-mizzles-stormy-mauve ^^
That’s it. I personally think its getting better, way to go!!
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