Hi there!
I just launched my Shopify store and would love some feedback on it. I have not run any ads to push traffic towards it. I’m waiting to see how the organic traffic is with my SEO. All feedback it welcome.
Website: www.reneeandgrey.com
A new Shopify store owner seeks feedback before running ads, particularly regarding SEO and organic traffic performance.
Performance & Technical Issues:
Homepage Improvements Suggested:
Product & Collection Pages:
Customer Experience Enhancements:
Marketing Opportunity:
With Mother’s Day 2023 approaching (ranked third-largest holiday after Black Friday/Christmas), consider special discounts and themed color palettes (Pastel Pink & Green, Red & White, Lilac & Light Blue).
Content Strategy:
Maintain consistent blogging schedule to improve organic traffic and online reputation.
Hi there!
I just launched my Shopify store and would love some feedback on it. I have not run any ads to push traffic towards it. I’m waiting to see how the organic traffic is with my SEO. All feedback it welcome.
Website: www.reneeandgrey.com
Hi @reneeandgrey ,
This is Richard - CRO Expert at PageFly - Shopify Advanced Page Builder app.
Congrats on your new store! From my CRO expertise, I’d love to give you my suggestions as hereby:
1. Check pagespeed for your store:
According to the Google Pagespeed Insights, the pagespeed of your homepage is 41 for mobile and 88 for desktop. This score is quite low for a page. If your stores have a low loading time, then your visitors won’t stick around and they will bounce. Stated differently, if your stores have a longer time checkout, your customers can give up. Pages load slowly gives people more time to change their minds.
These are some ways for you to apply to make your store run faster and quickly as well as reduce the loading time:
And you can try to improve these factors suggested by Google PageSpeed Insights here:
2. Homepage
2.1 Show a highlighted product or the best seller product
Showing a highlighted product or best seller product will help to boost sales for this product. You can take a look at one of our pre-made templates here as an example:
2.2 Show social media (optional)
The homepage now is showing the Instagram icon. Instead of using the icon only, you can show the media from your Instagram to boost sales.
You can try the Instafeed by SocialWidget or Instafeed | Instagram Feed app.
2.3 Add the benefit bar above the fold (optional)
2.4 Add the testimonial - customer reviews section
2.5 Add section about your brand story
A brand story helps customers understand more about your business and also helps your store look more professional.
3. Collection page - Use Load more instead of pagination
Additionally, with Mother’s Day 2023 fast approaching, also ranked as the third most significant holiday following Black Friday and Christmas, it is an opportune time to consider some compelling concepts for your business to take full advantage on this occasion.
1. Use colors palette associated with Mother’s Day
This kind of change makes your store more welcoming. You can refer to these pairs of colors:
2. Offer special discounts
Create special deals during Mother’s Day event like bundle or 1+1 offer is one of the best ways to boost your sales. You can highlight them on your homepage to be visible as soon as visitors reach your page and make it easy to navigate through your product offerings.
3. Create gift guides or a special section with product recommendations.
Creating gift guides or a product recommendation section can help increase engagement and sales on your Mother’s Day landing page. By organizing products by categories and themes, you can make it easier for shoppers to find the perfect gift for their mothers. Including product descriptions, images, and customer reviews can also help improve the shopping experience and boost conversion rates.
Best regards,
Richard | PageFly Team
Hello @reneeandgrey ,
I am Gina from flareAI app helping Shopify merchants get $6Million+ in sales from Google Search, on autopilot.
Having taken a close look at your store, I believe that below suggestions could help drive sales.

Hope this helps
Gina