Hi @Saab1989 ,
This is Richard from PageFly – Shopify Landing Page Builder App and I would like to give some feedback on your Homepage.
The product page layout
The white text here is not visible since it’s the same color with your background. The whole line also overlaps with the red badge above.
Besides, the layout of your product page is a bit confusing.
Theo video here is too small that viewers will have to click Fullscreen if they want to watch it closely.
The page still has plenty of blank space, you can consider make the video full-width.
Similarly, you have six images on the left hand side here that I recommend being put into a grid.
Do more on the homepage
Your homepage has room for improvements also. Keep people engaged by adding more sections.
Featured product
Visitors often recognize what is featured on your Homepage as your most interesting offer. That should be something you want to attract attention to, like your latest collection or a sales campaign.
This section is a good implementation of a featured product that lies in the middle of the Homepage, introduces their Christmas sales campaign, and helps shoppers get a quick grasp of what they sell.
Blog posts
Browsing further down, I believe that adding a few blog posts at the bottom of your Homepage can surely give your visitors some inspiration.
Take a look at how this student shopping business produce blogs on related topics:
Improve mobile page speed
Your store performance on Mobile is not so ideal, you can use the free Google tool PageSpeed Insights to check. Solutions to make your page load faster:
Page speed is extremely crucial for both buyer’s experience and Google ranking, so you could consider Shopify themes made to help you boost Google pagespeed score for your store such as Blum, Refresh, Dawn, etc.
Hope the feedback is helpful for you. Let me know if you have any questions!
Best of Luck,
– Richard | PageFly Team